The Poetic Chapters of MLP (Reference)

by Experimenteer

Chapter 6: Zip, Zap, Dash (Rainbow Dash)

Famous name to be the greatest exist. Potential recruit turns believing enroll,
Rumor being fast with heighten dash. Blitzed into a thundering clash.
Foolish eyes deceive to accept. Unwilling to determine the exactly route,
Surely they'll miss by chance. With measuring clicks illusion whips.

Winging glow, follow of palish breeze. Swiftly how air caught it feathers,
Suddenly boomed in sonic lauds. Before vanish in second scars.
Zip, zap, dashes the ease. Holler claim of behests of things,
Confidence is her weaken steam. Leveled lowly to overly ache.

To foolish believe that anyone betrays. Her petty tricks aren't to compare,
Compassionate heartens that thrash. Her fully rich is beyond certain fond.
Thinking arrogance and coward is action. Believing that she'll stab into submission,
Expect nothing more to her creed. Into searching her loyalties trust.

--Separation of poetic stanzas--

A famous name to greatest exist,
Rumors being fastest that blitz.
Foolish eyes deceive accept,
Missing by threading chance.

Winging that glows of paled,
Boomed into sonic lauds.
Zip, zap and dashes with ease,
Except for overly confident steam.

Foolish to believe of betrayal hope,
Compassion soul heartens thrash.
Reasons of action suffice little learn,
Expect many of her creeds.

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Enrolling potent to recruiting sight,
Thundering clash that dashes in might.
Plenty skeptics to her exactly route,
Measuring by a click to illusion whip.

How godly air caught her wings,
Sailing a vanish of second scars.
Hollering her claim to behest,
Only level in sourly detest.

Petty tricks isn't believable to work,
A fully rich that certain fondly wake.
Persuade to sense a stabbing surge,
Into searching her loyalties merge(hug).

Comments

[Dewberry Custard]

So far, everything is good!
Reading the lines make me feel like I'm chanting.
Do continue, I'd love to see the other characters described. Everything's in place.

[Jrakob]

reminiscent of Shakespeare :3
behold as I watch/fave/comment

I thought my pony poetry was good this is magnificent!