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Hmmm... Is this one of your new stories? It's interesting!
"I take it back... Me likey"
(Quote from Roman Pierce in "Furious 6")
"Oh shucks"
(Quote from Applejack)
"OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!"
(Quote from Rainbow Dash in "Sonic Rainbow" and "Wonderbolts Academy")
This story is awesome, not to mention: 20%... uh... You know what I mean... (I don't want to say THE WORD)
Wow, look at that like/dislike ratio! This is decently written, good descriptors, warm 'n fuzzies. Most likely, people are downvoting because of Flash Sentry. I disliked him in the human world because he was shallow and pointless, but we know next to nothing about the pony Flash. I like to think of him as a squared-away soldier, myself.
Good job here.
loved it
3584895 that is really annoying. those downvoters aren't even reading the story. their downvoting simply because it has flash sentry in it and puts him in a positive light.
3584868 And here I was about to ignore the story due to its rating...
3584895 hoorah...
3584895 Finally, an okay comment from you....
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Um... t-thank you? Have I garnered a reputation as a "bad: commenter?
3586070 Na, you're just usually yelling at people
3586071
WHAT IN THE ACTUAL FUCK ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT, YOU TOXIC PILE OF CUNT PUKE?! I DON'T YELL, I...
Oh. Uh... eh-heh, s-sorry. The Hat takes control sometimes...
3586094 You. I like you. You seem like someone that would make a good friend.
Very well written, i don't see why so many people wouldn't just fall for these types of stories, this really was awesome.
3585687 Hey! At least it's awesome!
3588199 Okay, I must say that is a LOT of corrections to be done... hmmm... thanks for pointing that out
3589278
Just trying to be a help.
3589281 I've made some changes based on what you've pointed out. I will delete the long list of errors now, but I'll still thank you for your help
3589461
It wasn't the longest batch of fixes I've had to compile. I did one two days ago that took — I think — 3.5 hours. Overall, your story wasn't bad, and that's what really matters. Grammar can be taught and learned; writing something interesting is more internal than that.
3589474 yeah... apparently, my speech grammar is better than my written grammar... and they still call me the best English Speaker in my Filipino School
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Ah, that explains the oddness in the preposition choices.
What?!?! The author is a Filipino?!?! Dude, ME TOO!!! Actually, I used to be best in speech grammar but now I'm best in both... And people are somewhat jealous when I won 1st on our Grade 8 Storywriting Contest by writing an MLP:FIM Story as an Entry...
Akala ko ako lang ang Pilipino dito eh... Hindi obvious, noh? AHAHAHAHA
Anyways nice writing though... Quite arousing for a female 13 year-old. LOL XD
I don't like Flash Sentry, but I gave it a shot and meh *shrugs* it was quite good.
Well..Just..Wow..I...Just... @_@
That was a beautiful story, incredibly well written and spaced out. The lead in to the sex scene was well timed and realistic, and the sex scene itself felt intimate and exciting. That last paragraph was quite the buzzkill, but other than that, very well done.
3603710 I still don't get why people are disliking Flash? I think he would make a good love interest for Twilight.
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Because Twilight Sparkle is our little OCD-Nerd,
It's a fact, ask a lot of people or just ask me, but Twilight Sparkle is our female nerd. Not some other character's play-thing.
hehe, for somene who spends alot of her time studying, Twilight sure knows how toplease a stallion!
This was a very good read. Consider it added to my list of faves.
Nice story! Another good Flash clopfic from you!
I don't think they realized that her friends were watching.
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I don't know about you viewers but I love the love life these two have
I really dont know why people hate him so much. I mean Flash/Twilight is one of three ships that could actually become canon in the show at some point, the other being Rarity/Spike and Flutters/Discord. Both get shipped pretty hard so why does Flash get all the hate?
This was great! Thumbs up!
so hot
niceeee...
3779994 That was my same reaction, and after I read it.
The pinnacle of romance imagery: caressing her cunt flaps.
Wait... What book was Twilight reading?...No...
Okay, I'm pretty sure any guy will agree, teeth on your penis is not pleasurable at all, it's kinda worrying
This is proof of this story being self aware. Literally everybody hates you flash... I hate to be the bringer of bad news... but it’s true.
Oh good, so even in Equestria the old saying is true. Lieutenants are the privates of the officer ranks lol. Poof Flash xD. Dont worry buddy, it gets better once you reach captain. They disobey you then, that's a court martial.
oh my, they must've enjoyed that