3435584
Done, thanks for the heads-up. I forgot when I published that Fimfic doesn't keep italics and such when you copy a story from a g-doc.

Sequel maybe?

3437269
Sorry, but that probably isn't going to happen, unless someone else would like to write one, in which case feel free. But I don't really have anything else I want to do with the scenario right now.

The last sentence destroyed my brain

R.I.P Snips and Snails.

We need an alt version where Spike sends that book to the Princess...

OMFG!!!!!

This was fucking PRICELESS!!!!!

Made my night!

Oh, I blogged about this, and I also shared the link to this fic with all my friends on FB as well.

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Okay, thanks. Man, glad you liked it so much.

3441727 It was incredibly funny and quite unique.
In my opinion, it belongs in the feature box.
That or maybe be submitted to Twilight's Library

gifrific.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/06/Tiger-Woods-fistpump-slow-motion.gif

The best ending even seen right now.

3442253
Thanks.

3441805
Thanks, although I don't see how it'd be very unique. Still, always nice to get good feedback.
BTW, if you like this kind of stuff, I recomend reading my first uploaded story. It may not be as mature, but it has a few good lines and is very much like this one, just milder.

3443078 I will add it to my list. Thank you.

3443167
No problem, a little shameless self promotion never hurt anyone.

Hahaha that last sentence tho! XD

3444889
Yep, the thing that the whole story has been building to.

I WAITED THE ENTIRE STORY FOR THAT!?! XDDDDDD Lol funny read though, very very funny. Good job XD

3458997
Did you read the warning? It clearly states that the comdey is crap, and that includes the punchline.

dude this was amazing.

3476342
Heh, thanks. Glad you liked it.

Spike...... You really really......... REALLLLLY... Need to get laid..... Funny as hell man XDXDXD

3482155
Thanks.

Well...while it was really obvious what the rumor was, I like how you wrote this idea. Some characters were slightly ooc, especially Twilight being princess and just doing you-all-know-what with some random guy... I get the feeling it was Flash Sentry... Still, I laughed a little bit so have up vote and a nice day

I liked the story fine - it was funny and everything - but for Celestia's sake, stop using "whom". Of the seven times you used it in this story, every single one was incorrect.

"Whom" is the objective case of "who", but you seem to use it for every relative clause, despite the fact that it was the subject each time and therefore should have been "who".

Examples:

"Aww Yeah! I'm first again," crowed Rainbow Dash, who was posing cockily.

"Wheee! I'm a grammar example!" said Pinkie, whom Applejack had shoved to the front of the line.

"Eeyup," said Big Macintosh, to whom the matter was quite obvious, since he was the one in the Apple family, who had studied language most extensively.

Remember the Song from The Court Jester:

♪ Giacomo is my nom de plume! ♩
♬ I whistle and hum, but I hum to whom? ♫
♩ To whom do I hum? To Whom? ♪
♫ <Whistles the secret whistle> ♬

Note: Like every internet post about grammar or spelling, this comment is guaranteed to contain at least 1 (one) error. If you spot it, you are entitled to feel smug about it for up to 15 (fifteen) seconds.

3536143
Well, glad you still liked it. Grammar isn't a strong point of mine, but then again, this story isn't exactly grade A stuff either, so it doesn't matter too much for me.

3536718

That's okay, I just wanted to let you know. I wouldn't bother nitpicking the grammar, if I didn't think the story was worth it.

There needs to a sort of continuation for this. Obviously Spike's been misled by listening and agreeing with Snips and Snails. And I agree with Pinkie: It's time for THE TALK, though the only thing that I get a little peeved at this is that we are assuming Spike underage again and is blissfully ignorant of sex. The story obviously knows all about that part of the birds and the bees, but we see that Spike doesn't understand innuendo.

I do think that the mane 6 will forgive him, and get just vindication for Spike, as well as just punishment for the two idiot colts.

Seriously, both Twilight and Spike need to apologize for each other: Spike for not believing everything he hears and making Twilight so embarrassed, and Twilight for not actually listening to Spike and figuring out what was going on, as opposed to literally chaining him up and making him seem like a common criminal. In the end, it was an honest misunderstanding that went into WTF?! territory...

Communication.....such a lost art nowadays....what ever happened to both sides of the story, and jumping to conclusions, Twilight, Spike, and the rest of the Mane 6? Shame to all of ya

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Thanks, although I think you're reading a bit deep into it. Still, if I ever find a way to continue this one, I will, although it'll have to take a different route than this one.

Those two are dead

Well that was interesting! Lol great story!