Would you mean she's knew being a girl?"
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Nice!

The story is interesting and the plot is great, but holy moly, work out that grammar! It's not so bad that it severely distracts from the story, but it's there, there and everywhere! And I'm too lazy to point them out for you!

Still, loving it!

I would have done the same thing if I were in his/her shoes.

Continue this please.

Please continue this masterpiece of a story

P.S. Also work on your grammar a bit

more.

I am Admiral Jenna, of the I.R.W Scimitar The Romulan Empire finds this story... Amazing, and we wish to know what happens next, we demand you continue it. You will right more or your planet will face complete destruction, comply if you value to continued existence of your race.

ME NEED UPDATO!

COMPRENDO!?

Please, continue this.

Really disapointing you don't continue. Really like this story. Also don't know if its just me but there is too much sexual talking in this. I think the story could have done with out it. Besides fleur's commentary on everything. That i like. Anyway would like you you continue