Floreal Emilio Guadiana Sgt, for U.S. Marine Recon killed in action now finds himself or should I say herself in a new land as one of the most beautiful woman in the country.
3438728 You made a MiE fic, of fucking course it's going to be hated. MiE is one of the worst possible 'ideas' you can think of for a story. It's been done so much, it's pretty much spam.
3438728 People don't like soldier manz in Equestria after a good trillion appeared on the site, most sucking donkey pecker. It's not the substance, but the style. Just show the story can be good and that it doesn't suck.
3438728 Well... I suggest that you make a twist in it. Take away the 'dark' tag, yes, his death was tragic, but let that be the only ''dark'' thing to happen. Then keep concentrating on the comedy and randomness. In short what you got here is (the potential stereotype of a marine) a mix between AJ and RD with a potty mouth, who is the identical twin of (famous) stereotypical top model.
The Cliche of MiE is mainly: -Soldier appears in Equestria -Soldier still human and mistrusted by ponies -Small crisis happens and Soldier helps..... now accepted by ponies -major villain appears and cause major problem -Soldier joins EoH and defeats villain. If 'romance' is introduced in story, Soldier usually stays in Equestria (maybe as pony). If not he gets home or died in last battle against villain.
If 'romance' is introduced in story, Soldier usually stays in Equestria (maybe as pony). If not he gets home or died in last battle against villain.
And he can be resurrected after a 2 chapters pause, according to section #19-3.2, that states that if Author invokes 'hand of writer' and introduces the rights of using 'deus-ex-machina' ยง5-RGB #63.5-1. Then the author may revive the character in an overly dramatic fashion. The tone of the setting must reflect the tone of ''Did you miss me?''
This story can't be that bad... Can it?
3438728 You made a MiE fic, of fucking course it's going to be hated. MiE is one of the worst possible 'ideas' you can think of for a story. It's been done so much, it's pretty much spam.
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People don't like soldier manz in Equestria after a good trillion appeared on the site, most sucking donkey pecker. It's not the substance, but the style. Just show the story can be good and that it doesn't suck.
awesome story so far hope you keep going
3438728 Well... I suggest that you make a twist in it.
Take away the 'dark' tag, yes, his death was tragic, but let that be the only ''dark'' thing to happen. Then keep concentrating on the comedy and randomness. In short what you got here is (the potential stereotype of a marine) a mix between AJ and RD with a potty mouth, who is the identical twin of (famous) stereotypical top model.
The Cliche of MiE is mainly:
-Soldier appears in Equestria
-Soldier still human and mistrusted by ponies
-Small crisis happens and Soldier helps..... now accepted by ponies
-major villain appears and cause major problem
-Soldier joins EoH and defeats villain.
If 'romance' is introduced in story, Soldier usually stays in Equestria (maybe as pony). If not he gets home or died in last battle against villain.
3444049 Or dies but doesnt really due to plot device number 82167-B
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And he can be resurrected after a 2 chapters pause, according to section #19-3.2, that states that if Author invokes 'hand of writer' and introduces the rights of using 'deus-ex-machina' ยง5-RGB #63.5-1. Then the author may revive the character in an overly dramatic fashion. The tone of the setting must reflect the tone of ''Did you miss me?''
3445199 Im talking about Died,Then got Deus-Ex-Machina'd back to life through some sort of plot device/magical Macguffin
3445210 It thought that Macguffin never needed magic, as long as he have some dried straw, a Swiss army-knife and a paper clip.!trollface!
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Ps: get over to the Rarity story and we can span this conversation over 3 stories of the same author... just for the hell of it.
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Really, That stupid reason.
That reason is above stupid.
Just go shows that human stupidity is infinite.
Just because it done before doesn't it bad.
There is nothing new under the sun we have done almost everything
Your grammar is really good for using a phone