Don was never interested in MLP or anything, while his friend Samantha (or Sam for short) is a total pegasister. One day he caught her up, as she was watching "Call of the Cutie", he couldn't help but ask what all the fuss was about.
He was never a fan of someone's destiny being predicted beforehand and in result the whole cutie mark thing went totally against him.
Sam isn't completely against the idea, just wants to have a choice.
Now, let's throw two blank flanks into Equestria.
Edited: 02.09.2015
Fuck man This is a great start ;)
A good start, I'd like to see where it goes from here.
An intresting start
Nice thus far, keep it up.
Giggle fits, ahoy!
Uhh... you might need to fix your description, somewhat.
What's he doing grabbing her and copping a feel at the same time? or is he throwing a net over her to catch her?
While that word is for honest and open / precise / direct... it sounds very strange if you read that sentence out loud.
Umm, is that part of your notes you forgot to delete?
5535132 I can answer the last one. It's supposed to be a bad joke.
"While this may seems unprofessional..."
seem or just get rid of may
You wrote this too? I faved this befor I read the I'm a God? story involving Faust ,hope to see these stories updated
two things. first: stallion means boy automatically. maybe replace that with young. second, why does he already know what fangirl overload is? That doesn't sound like the kind of thing he should know about.
The title just sounds awsome.