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After a flying accident, Rainbow Dash dies, and once she gets a taste of the afterlife, she becomes rather happy she did. But her mournful friends want to bring her back to life. Will rainbow dash be able to fly freely forever or will she have to take on the annoying roles of everyday life-before-death again.
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(first person Rainbow/Scootaloo.)
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3456914
The way I see it, if they personally don't like then that's fine, and thanks. Any support I can get on my first story (kinda) I appreciate very much.
Interesting idea. I can't wait to see more. Good luck.
I'ma favorite the shit out of this. I really like where this is going.
Keep up the good work, man :)
3458592 agreed
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No need to worry, chapter 2 has just been finished and will be going through a proofreading/editing process soon
Ah yes, the second chapter. One of many that will be a part of this fanfic. Hope you people enjoy this story.
Randome comment!
3462213 I'm enjoying it
I await, slightly patient, for the next chapter.
3468059
Trust me I will work on it as much as I can overnight, however I tend to get writer's block for awhile after I get the begining finished. It's a huge pain and a detrement to my thought process.
3468059
It's 1:30 in the morning and I'm tired as hell, be on the lookout for the chapter some time this week
Alright, got chapter 3 done and it has been sent to my new editor, I shall await the feedback and hope it isn't negative.
No, it's not slow. In fact, I suggest you take some time to flesh out each moment and the characters' thoughts and emotions so that the reader will feel more involved, feeling what the characters are feeling instead of just being a spectator.
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Alright, first time somebody helped me realize I should have said the opposite, but again, I'm still relatively new to writing so I don't know how good I can be at fleshing out emotions more than I have already, but I'll give it a shot
3475504 I'm just trying to be helpful. I haven't actually written anything myself so don't take my words so seriously as I don't have any experience as an author.
However, you are doing quite well for someone who claims to be new to writing. Whatever it is, the only way to get better is to practice, as practice makes perfect :)
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Even if you don't have experience, it doesn't mean this isn't a talent of yours, I would suggest you take a shot at writing, or editing.
Try doing a one shot and see how the community thinks of your writing.
3475612 Heh, thanks man. I've been meaning to do something but I've been busy with these dumb exams. Maybe when it's all over I'll try and get something out. Thanks for the encouragement!
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Well, more writers means more things to read and more people to help, plus it's what this website was designed for, so why not attempt it.
I need more of this!!!!! NOW
(if u don't understand then I like this story
)
3485218
I am going to continue this, there is no need for worry. Just trying to get out of some heavy writer's block since the next chapter will be introducing something new to the story but not sure how to make a working transition.
Woo next chapter finished and been sent to my editor. I thank you all
3456914, 3458203, 3458592, 3467983, and>>3468059 for allowing me to realize i'm not absolute crap at writing.
this story is showing a lot of promise i look forward to more
3603392
Well good and bad news about that. The next chapter is going under a review of two (count them! one, two.) editors.
Bad news: I am putting this story on Hiatus once that chapter is cleared for submission. The reasons to it will be put in the Author's Notes for that chapter
nice chapter
and I'm whit u ugh
I lost a dislike, I actually lost a dislike.
is that even possible?
3734985 i-...i really didnt think it was
3734985 maybe someone changed their downvote to an upvote. :O
3736571
Let's stay realistic here man.
3734985 Maybe someone got a little to happy with the ban hammer?
It's back. that fifth downvote is back
Hey tut as promised your review has been posted! Here is the link! Great story so far, earned a like and favorite from me!
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Thank you for taking the time to read my story.
Wow this shapter is him how do I say this........ soooo awsome
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I accept your kisses and return one of my own
Great chapter absolutely love it 3 kisses 4 u my good sir
Speaking as a fan of Dashie ghosts (coughandasawriterofsamecough) I like this story so far. It gets an upvote.
Awwwww poor Scoots
I refuse 2 take away my favorite on this sotry u god damn deserved that gold star so wear it like an 5 year old whit pride! <3 (I dont have gold so I made u an paper one so u will lool like an 5 year old)