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applejack isn't that a cereal or something I think fluttershy is confused
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I don't even really know what she could be talking about!
Also this is fun. We can comment on stories that aren't even approved yet. Why the boners isn't my story approved yet?!
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not enough passionate fluttershy kissing obv
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Next story idea: Fluttershy's Passionate Hors Kisses.
Obvious trollfic is obvious.
Try a little harder next time.
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The purpose of this story is to entertain, not annoy. I think you are confused about what trolling is.
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Trolling can be entertaining depending on which side of the divide you're on.
I'm just saying that you're trying too hard.
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Last time you said I wasn't trying hard enough. You seem to be a very confused individual.
I just wrote a story about colorful horses, with no intent to annoy or upset anyone at all.
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Try a little harder means don't make it so obvious.
And your continued idiot responses are not helping matters. I know you're trying to be funny, but it's not working. So I give you the last word. Please try to make it count.
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count
It's Applejack! Not Applehat or Applenoun! APPLEJACK!!!!!!! YOU HEAR ME????
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Did you read to the end?
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yes...
And then I laughed.
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Okay then, excellent.
I'm a reviewer from the group 'Plan 9 from Equestria' and unfortunely for you the fic is deemed awful enough to make it into the group as decided by the groups 144 members. Or luckily it's so bad its good it made it into the group, either way its going to get a review and there's nothing you can do about. Lets see if this 'abides' by me.
Well... I'm literally speechless. Not only did this make me laugh I didn't even grimace at all. Somehow, and god knows how, this is written splendidly. Punctuation is perfect and solid, it only falls short in pacing and actual god damn plot. Did I like it? Yes. If this was a genuine story written with fantastic pacing confliction, would it be featured? Hell to the yeah! I'm half tempted to steal this idea myself and write it, but I'll give you a day, if nothing then... fuck off.
2 Abides Out Of 5
Abiding it like chinese food: I'm not terribly sure what the rest of your food it like but I know I like noodles!
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Thanks for recognizing that I know how to put sentences together. The fact that you laughed and didn't grimace means the story did exactly what it was supposed to do: Be funny! It's not some serious take on Rainbow Dash struggling with her sexuality, it's humorous nonsense that's supposed to make people laugh. I don't really think dragging it out or adding any more of a plot would really benefit that goal.
Anyway, thanks for commenting and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
As an aside, I think my story was added solely because that Umachan guy didn't like how I talked to him in the comments. At the time he added it, it had the same number of likes and dislikes, so it shouldn't have been added at all according to the group's rules!
WHAT?!
But hah! Fluttershy, and Twilight of course...
Mostly Fluttershy. Adorable Flutters.
Pinkie Pie just was Pinkie Pie, and Rarity was like, blegh. But I think that's a natural reaction.
Rainbow Dash, SMH.
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Adorable Flutters. "Hors" had to be the weirdest looking joke, and I wasn't sure what Applehat was supposed to be, until I came across Applenoun (I laughed)
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Maybe Fluttershy is the best colorful horse. I am not sure, but it could be true.
Actually all of them are great in their own ways, although my horribly flanderized versions hardly do them justice.
I am going to consider your reaction to the story to be a success.
This has a very good moral at the end and this makes it a very good story and I liked the part when poop.
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That's not anybody's favorite part!
Six paragraphs in, and I'm out.
I hate this and I hate everyone.
11/10, best fic ever
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gold star to me and I am sorry you had to read that.
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Reminder that this story is, in fact, the only thing in existence that is too gay.
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I could have made it gayer. Somehow. I'm not sure how, but I'm sure it's possible.