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This was pretty hilarious. I'm guessing it won't go into actual clop? Either way, it was pretty funny.
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3422490 whoops! Forgot to change that... was rated teen but it couldn't pass moderation. Thanks for the reminder!
Thanks so much for the compliments!
Weird but, still not as weird as 4chan....
I just need a little help to publicise this... I'm quite new to fanfiction so I'd really appreciate it if anybody can tell me ways to get this known.
I am absolutely loving the premise and think this first chapter is superb. I hope you will keep this going and I will keep my eye on it. I have a YouTube channel where I read clopfics and if this continues to be this good for a few more chapters I would love to feature it.
If this doesn't ever go into actual sex I think that would be more entertaining and original then how pretty much every other HiE fic turns out. Would love to see him show strength of character by being able to restrain himself despite his situation. As a clopper myself who kind of fits this character I'd like to see him not just be completely evil.
As an additional note one of my favorite HiE clopfics hell most favorite HiE clopfic involved the main human character not giving into his urges until 30,000 words and was done under duress of blackmail. So managed to make the reader feel some sympathy for the clopper.
LOL a nice parody of what haters imagine cloppers to be like.
3424573 Thanks for the feedback! I really am not planning to make this anything less than a comedy, though character development will be emphasized, so don't you fret about the plot. The PLOT. Oh, and please do tell me the name of your Youtube channel!
3424966 The Mystery Fluttershy Fan
http://www.youtube.com/channel/UCZPSFR1pl9nMtJYzWAaQA_w
i have read, seen, imagined and been told of some FUCKED UP SHIT!!.....
This takes the cake.
i have read foalcon
i have read futa
i have read marems threesomes, fillyfooling torture and tentacles...
in terms of WTF! This beats them all.
[Sigh] at least it didn't contain scat
I want to give constructive feedback... i really do... But the best i got is this.
Do some serious editing and turn this into a cliched HiE fic where he bangs the mane six the cutie mark crusaders WHOEVER YOU LIKE! ... Just.... no super sayan discord bukake.... please
Aaaaannndd I've had enough internet for today......
Now I've seen everything.
I laughed.
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Hmmm.... Who are you trying to get it more known to? Simply a larger audience of fan fiction readers or more of the clopper variety? Is this to get on the board?
The most obvious answer to my mind would be Equestria After Dark. This is really kind of their thing. That does not mean it will get picked up but it might.
They have a submission email address with instructions. IF you are looking for the broader fan fiction experience Equestria Daily and numerous other pony sites would usually handle it. I do not really see Equestria Daily handling this though. Some of the other sites might buuut I still think Equestria After Dark is more of your target audience.
If you want to try something else besides Equestria After Dark then you could try and find a clopper who is active with a bloghere or else where OR a Deviant Art page and well known to promote others works. You could try the groups here on this site too to see if anyone would help. I would reserve that as a last resort though. You would not want to alienate yourself.
I suggest Equestria After Dark.
3435978 thank you so much!
Oh, and a spoiler for the next chap: 8===D
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Um...
That got really random. Not the direction I was hoping this story would go. I was hoping something a bit more serious and realistic.
Oh well. Not gonna unlike it, it's your story and your decision what to do with it.
3441342 eh, the third chapter will explore more of the pony and human relations, so don't worry.
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>Serious and realistic
Sir, have you seen the title of this story?
3442347 Brony Dingus, you are a cancer to the Internet and henceforth I shall desecrate you and banish you from my story, such that you will be fed to the dogs.
This brings me many hours of mind-fucks.
3442664 ummm... why? Seemed like the most sane chapter in my opinion.
Would read more of this, but the Gary Stu-ish protagonist made me lose interest. No offense.
3443361 what do you mean exactly by that? He's too 'perfect'?
3444636 Yes, unfortunately. There doesn't seem to be many flaws with the character, which there should always be some to balance out the strengths. However, since this story isn't finished, you could probably remedy that along the way.
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How is creeper, rapist, horse bucker, who has nothing better to do than masterbate all day, flawless character traits? In the battle with Discord I admit a series of natural flawless luck seems improbable. But this is Discord here when is he not improbable? Only something so over the top like this could possibly make any kind of defeat of Discord seem legit.
What bothers me is how everypony treats him like an Autistic child, its a bit dangerous but I'm getting the sense they know what hes about and are 'tolerating' him.
Rarity asumes he in heat which is hilarious
but seriously how selfish of him. I dont care if you have ED or a needle pecker, finish what you start!
3451251 My apologizes. I confess that I stopped reading at the moment when everyone called Stuart amazing. So therefore I did not read it all. Please excuse my foolishness.
3451340
I see, from his own prospective wouldn't it be odd if he didn't think of himself as a perfect character? Since its written from his perspective he infers that the ponies think he is awsome. Watching that self image slowly melt away as his true nature is revealed is what makes this fic interesting.
Damn! Calm down Satan!!! XD
Sorry but all I can think of is.... Trolololololol!
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No need for fear, the next chapter will be the longest of all the chapters and have the glorious clop you cloppers desperately need.
3472358 I hope it is glorious as you say.
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OK....I'm surprisingly ok with this....
That was quite possibly the most beautiful piece of music I have heard in my entire life. All praise Dalton, rutter of the UNIVERSE! (*u*)
That... Was the weirdest thing I have ever read... Are you sure you weren't high for the whole story?
3958631 I don't really remember but it's been 5ever since somebody commented on this. I'll take that comment as a compliment
3958634 I was about to edit it saying it was a good story... It just kinda disturbs me because it reminded me that there are bronies like this Dalton character... Nice writing... That was a weird one.
3958640 There are few bronies like that lel, this Stuart Dalton is a fantasy character from my twisted mind and if I ever meet a brony like him I'd shake his hand (or maybe not since it might be infected with his own clopping juice)
3958649 O_O most likely
Anyways love your other stories too Bice work ^_^
>tfw you're 30 and the first time you cum in someone's mouth, it's in a 40 feet rampaging draconequus'
I'm not sure I'd have laughed as hard without half a bottle of Jack's in hand/stomach, but damn I had a good time reading this.
I though he was going to fail the quiz that Discord gave to him...
But I guess the answers just came to him.