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>Serious and realistic

Sir, have you seen the title of this story?

3442347 Brony Dingus, you are a cancer to the Internet and henceforth I shall desecrate you and banish you from my story, such that you will be fed to the dogs.

This brings me many hours of mind-fucks.

3442664 ummm... why? Seemed like the most sane chapter in my opinion.

Would read more of this, but the Gary Stu-ish protagonist made me lose interest. No offense.

3443361 what do you mean exactly by that? He's too 'perfect'?

3444636 Yes, unfortunately. There doesn't seem to be many flaws with the character, which there should always be some to balance out the strengths. However, since this story isn't finished, you could probably remedy that along the way.

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How is creeper, rapist, horse bucker, who has nothing better to do than masterbate all day, flawless character traits? In the battle with Discord I admit a series of natural flawless luck seems improbable. But this is Discord here when is he not improbable? Only something so over the top like this could possibly make any kind of defeat of Discord seem legit.

What bothers me is how everypony treats him like an Autistic child, its a bit dangerous but I'm getting the sense they know what hes about and are 'tolerating' him.

Rarity asumes he in heat which is hilarious but seriously how selfish of him. I dont care if you have ED or a needle pecker, finish what you start!

3451251 My apologizes. I confess that I stopped reading at the moment when everyone called Stuart amazing. So therefore I did not read it all. Please excuse my foolishness.

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I see, from his own prospective wouldn't it be odd if he didn't think of himself as a perfect character? Since its written from his perspective he infers that the ponies think he is awsome. Watching that self image slowly melt away as his true nature is revealed is what makes this fic interesting.

That was quite possibly the most beautiful piece of music I have heard in my entire life. All praise Dalton, rutter of the UNIVERSE! (*u*)