• Member Since 5th Sep, 2013
  • offline last seen Dec 2nd, 2016

keffledorf


i write short stories and occasionally a long one ill try to keep adding stories for my time here, goodbye and good clopping

Comments ( 8 )

Should I even give this story a chance?

SEQUEL!!!!!

(I mean might as well, you're going to hell for this anyway, penny for a pound)

-Horrible Dialogue
-Horrible Transitions
-Horrible, just, general content
-There was no sleuthing involved directly from our Sleuths, the whole thing just /solved itself/
-Worst plot twist ever.

I loved it. Genuinely did. It was /funny/ and best of all, it's so short it didn't waste my gotdamn time, which is the best trait bullshit can have.

10/10

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the voices
did not calm down to this:raritycry:

A murder mystery in less than 2000 words? Is there a reason I should even bother reading this?

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