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little dashie


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FIRST!!!!!

real comment when I feel like it

148519 god damnit lightning stop firsting....

Also guys... I'm real sorry for the typos... I'm currently looking for a prereader... If you interested send me a PM!

Also I would LOVE to see front page so don't rate it bad just because I can't spell worth shit...

Love you all!
-Dashie

I myself dont give a damn if things are misspelled or not. If i can make out what the author is trying to say, that's fine with me. 5 out of 5.
(I envy your writing skills, because im not that good at it :fluttershysad: )

Heh,Heh,Heh,Heh.....I like where this story is going....:rainbowkiss:

FIRST!!!!

Real comment later

I know my story hasn't been out that long but I really wanted to get the turning point out so I have time to think of my direction while 'YOU' Figure out what 'YOU' want to do...

-Dashie

148844 were you really waiting for me to hit publish????

I swear to fucking Celestia!!!! I LOVE YOU GUYS!!!!!!!

FUCK ALL THE HATE,
-Dashie

SQUEE!!!

148844 dear god, how many first's have u gotten?

148883 No one counted because no one gave a fuck... also hope you read the author's note!!!

148881 stop firsting... I'll delete the next one you do.... It's not cool... It makes me happy to know someone reads my fics but it also makes me sad that you have nothing else to say....

"Oopsie..."
-Dashie

148908 I did and thanks for the shoutout :pinkiehappy:

148914 no thank you for the 5 stars!

Front page here I wish I come!!!

anyways on another note guess as to what the curveball is and if you get it right you get 2 votes... so you can put an edge to the one you like better!!! don't comb through it and make random ass guesses... Won't help... It's pretty fucking obvious but it will get harder just as in life...

-Dashie

148908

Fine.....:pinkiecrazy:

:trollestia:But I'll be FIRST and say some random thing or something about your story.
There, that better?

148883

I have a shit load of Firsts.

I don't really give a shit about it though.:trollestia:

148908

Hey, you need to calm down cause do you not read the second part of my text.

The other part says"Real comment later"!

So I do comment on it later so calm down.DAMN!!!:rainbowkiss:

149064 I do but Id rather have it be a real comment seeing how you could just read it and then comment... Start reading faster!

-Dashie

Ice

Well ti's nice to see the sequel

5/5 from ten!!! i love you all i literally squeed!!!

oh my gosh AMy actually lived? No ofense but i kinda saw that reagic thing happening.

Shit. I'm going on a date now...before seeing my ex the next day? This next chapter is gonna be wierd....I can't wait.:pinkiehappy:

She was still alive... :fluttercry:

Nah... anyways... if u guys won't choose ill start writing tonight... you might not like what i choose

.... ok guys... i a little upset that there was a lot of votes in the prequel .... and like one guess now...

:fluttercry:

anyways the choice was to stay or leave IF Jade was gonna have a foal...

-Dashie

JESUS CHRIST!!! ITS ONLY BEEN TWO MINUTES!!!

I LOVE YOU!!!! NO HOMO!!!

Huh, can't believe she can never have any kids.
Now she wants to be alone for a couple of days, where will he go?
And now Rarity,Fluttershy and,uh.......whoever are coming tommorow!
This is going to suck....

And he and fluttershy used to be together...DRAMA!!!

Wow bro...that's deep. Can't wait for the next one though

154833 Ya... I had thought real hard about the kid for some time and I was like Oh... This will do nicely... I really, really didn't want to but then I thought of the twist... Oops... You don't get to know about that... You guys almost made me slip up... Almost...

5/5 from 17 I love you guys! and ladies if there are any lol

anyways I'm real happy about it but I know the more 5/5 I get the more it's gonna hurt to see a 4.9/5 or lower... I want to let you guys know that there will be a regular chapter tomorrow!!! You will have to choose what you want to do... I want you to make the choose off of emotion and wit... Let your feelings take the better though I want you to put yourself in 'your' situation...

That is all,
-Dashie

154941 I like the twists. I feel for the character...which is awesome! :twilightsmile:

up wrapping her hindlegs around your waist. You put one arm under.
but if you were to leave Permanently you at least had to Other then those two, very good.

No, I'm not to sure I want one...
So on and so forth...
You rolled her over in the large tub and
Your hoof was rubbing her cutie mark
You gasped and out flowed your juices(Not really sure what you were trying to do there, that was a little confusing to me). Hers followed very soon after.
He paused for a second. He looked like he was gonna
I hope to see you well and happy.I sent the letter to this address because that is where the paper said you were staying at the moment.
three ponies who didn't know I was still alive until

Few more errors in this one. But I'm going to start showing them to you so you can repair them. Good story.

She put both of her hooves around your head and kept her lips planted against yours.
You moved your arm up behind her head and pulled it into your chest.
Only two I found in this chapter. Keep it up. Good story.

Sadface ...... 4.8/5 from 21

.... :raritydespair:

Ice

156012 XD nice chapter btw

Damn.....You and your step-sister?
Even thought its kinky, its still a bit wrong....Meh, who cares?

So I would have to say for you to go wander around.

Ya i know this is a wired chapter but it all has a purpose...

i don't know why but i say my vote is to stay on the porch and not go in

I say go inside we left Amy to die why leave Jade...besides adoption is always an option (they need a Zecora emoticon)

157816

Fuck Adoption.....just get him a new bitch and its all right.

My Vote Would Be For Him To Not Go In.

3-1 wander around... im not gonna post a chapter tonight sorry guys... i will leave voting up for today so that people have some time... i posted it a little late last night...

was giving you, but lately he had been getting
She flipped over and laid on the ground extending her rear end into the air. [Rear end sounds better to me over hind end]

That's all I found this time. I put my vote for go inside and talk with Moonjade and stay with her. Maybe have the love they share soften "us" up a bit. Love is a powerful force, it can soften even the hardest hearts like vinegar to bone. Try it, some trippy shit, it will turn the bone into something as flexiable like rubber, only it can't stretch.

158465 Ya i remember that shit from fifth grade! Now i want to do that!

158516 It's cool. I've done it with Chicken Bones from those 2.50$ deli Chickens from Kroger. and FYI, in the first sentence, that's a coma that I corrected, thought the bold would show up better.

No grammatical errors? Yay:yay: I'm not going to jump of a cliff any time soon :pinkiecrazy:

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