Applejack takes her filly, Honeycrisp, to the burial site of her parents and recalls the last moments she had with them.
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The Lunar Samurai
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Short, but with enough feels to make me cry myself to sleep.
Good job.
Gosh dang man. When I first read the description I thought it said that Applejack was BURYING her foal Honeycrisp with her parents. That would have make me seriously depressed
Still like this one, although the death seems kinda, off for some reason.
God dammit man. Why does this have to be sad!
Lunar, you've got to stop hitting me with the-
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F-feels... ow.
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It is a strange occurrence, trains usually don't go careening into gorges, especially on such well traveled routes such as the one from ponyville to appleloosa. Very strange indeed...
Finally! The down-voter showed up.
Well then, it looks like the hijacker's plans...
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...were derailed.
YEEEEEEEAAAAAAAHH!!!!
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Implying those weren't his plans in the first place
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I lost my glasses...
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Could be, you never told us. Personally, i would find that story a lot more interesting considering this is like the 10th story like this i have read today. Overly dramatic sad stories are all too common here.
*Pumps shutgun*
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It just happens to be my writing style as of late. I'm not sure why, but I am trying to branch out into more lighthearted stories.
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just messing with you another great sad fic.
BWHAAA
*pulls you closer*
You make another sad fic that will drive me in tears I'll murder you.
Love your writing
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I didn't say it was bad and your writing style is fine. It is just the content. The content was flat an boring. I don't mean to single you out on this and i am not trolling you either but writing stories that are sad are well below your writing level. Sorrow is the easiest feeling to evoke in people. Most everyone has experienced the loss of a loved one or a pet so it is easy for them to connect to the person in the story. What people forget though is that sorrow is only a story element, not a story. It is a way to draw an audience into your story. Look at 'Of Mice and Men' or 'All Quiet on the Western Front' or if you really want to look at 'Old Yeller'. All of these stories end on a sad note, but that is not what these stories are about.
You can do better than this.
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I accept your challenge, but the fruits will be born later on. I have been meaning to branch out, but sorrow is my fall back option when I have run out of time. Thanks for the advice, I'll take heed to follow it for a more diversified portfolio.