• Published 5th Oct 2013
  • 5,268 Views, 58 Comments

Big Mac Accidently Makes a Harem - UmemotoJiro



Big Macintosh is Ponyville's most eligible bachelor and through the course of a week ends up sleeping with each of the mane6.

Comments ( 8 )

I loved Mac's line near the end it was funny as Hell.

... And so it ends. I am both amused and disturbed by this entire story, and thus my mood is adequate. May God have mercy upon us all; I think that you should very rightly make a sequel just for the hell of it, and may the lulz guide you as they are want to.

Drunk Celestia is scary:trollestia:

wow. just, wow

Is it scary that I read Celestias letter in the drunk Molestia voice?:twilightoops:

What can I say ? Two things. About story and about downvoters. About story: This story is excellent!:pinkiehappy: About downvoters:They're just a bunch of freaking bastards.:flutterrage: Of course, this text has a few problems (especially with grammar), but thanks to the great and funny plot, these shortcomings are not so noticeable. I am glad to hear that this story will have a sequels and I already like their titles. Except for this title - "Mac's multiverse gender bender adventure" . I don't like all this stuff with rule 63 ... I agree with Captain unstoppable about the fact that Big Mac is MLPverse Chuck Norris and this why...https://i.chzbgr.com/maxW500/4476178944/h9F7E4C1F/

Good read. Too many grammatical errors.

I think that the clop could have been longer in each chapter.. More detailed perhaps? I liked the genral over all story; I like the thought behind it...

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