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kainofthesand


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I'd like to thank DarknessRising, he's the one who came up with the idea an commissioned me, I'm just the pen.

i do not know why i enjoyed this

Poor Twilight, and those poor stallions. They're going to go looking for Twilight at the school only to find that she now lives in Ponyville, that's gotta suck.

Could use another pass for editing, but otherwise pretty good.

I like this. Continue.

I like this, but it could use some editing. Also, the title of the chapter was very misleading.

This is... something, alright. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work.

Yes. While I know what awaits in the canon for the little guy, I hope we can see more SpikeBloom.

Definitely not regretting Favouriting this one. Keep it up!

A pony society where sex is a normal part of everyday life, to point of which having the Apple Family mares have an orgy with Twilight in public is seen as perfectly ordinary? I love it! MORE PLEASE!

WoooooooooW!
And that was just the first stop. I have a feeling things are about to get kinkier as we go on. Have a like.:twilightsmile:

Nice to see that Punjoke wasn't the only one to envision this version of Equestria.

Edit: Oh lord, I can't believe I mixed up Punjoke and Raging Semi...

5387959 Former member, and I mixed him up with Punjoke at that. Both can found on the Explicit Pony Fiction Archive website.

Rarity's should definitely be bondage related; there were so many ribbons and other decorations one could get tied up in, after all.

Masturbate. Not masterbate.

...It's better then what I was originally thinking.

I... I... What!? I mean, I know this is a very sexual version of Equestria but surely what Rarity did to Twilight (and maybe Spike too) is still illegal. Twilight didn't consent to that in the slightest! I don't think any version of Rarity would do that.

5440396 You seriously think that after 1000+ Years of lust, sex, & debauchery, anyone would care?

5445642 Well, I suppose not, but it certainly gets in the way of Twilight making friends with her. If Rarity only thinks of Twilight as a 'plaything', not a great place for a friendship to start.

5447459 The same could be said for the way they originally met... considering she forced her into several dresses against her will.

5447517 That is true, I have always thought that actually. The diference is in the original, Rarity respected her.

I'm curious, considering how this Equestria consider sex and debauchery to be as natural as breathing and talking, does raping somepony here the equivalent of just being rude or are their more repercussions to it than that?

just curious. awesome fic by the way. love it.

More please <3

Poor Twilight, I mean I know she ended up liking it, but what a terrifying experience. And once again, Spike gets the better deal. I almost feel sorry for Nightmare Moon, by the time Twilight gets to her she'll be so pissed that she'll probably just blast Nightmare Moon into a million pieces.

5484875 Well, if something happens enough it can be considered the norm especially if your rulers not only condone it but encourage it as well. I'm sure there's something in the laws about rape but I'd have to guess that doesn't happen very often considering nearly everyone is willing to have sex.

...I've felt like I've read this before...:twilightoops: or at least something incredibly similar. heh.:twilightsheepish:

i love it.

5484875 no still means no, but in this world rape is more like walking into someone's kitchen and eating their last piece of pizza.

what a rather interesting approach.

*sigh* I still find Rarity wholly unpleasant in this story. I really hope her experience in the everfree knocks her down a peg or two.
...other than that, I liked is chapter, especially Pinkie

If Nightmare isn't packing something a bit extra in her confrontation with the Mane Six I'm going to be a bit disappointed.

It hadn't sunk in fully till she was away, but Twilight realized that those dogs were the first cocks (aside from the princess') to be inside her, and while it was fun and pleasurable, she couldn't help but feel a bit sad. She hadn't even had Spike or her brother in that way.

She had thought, in quiet moments, about really giving herself to someone she really loved. Not just sex, but someone who she could talk and share all the things she loved and enjoyed. Her books, her walks, sipping hot coco while watching the first snow fall from her window.

:fluttershysad::fluttercry: Poor Twilight.

5576624 I agree completely, I mean how can Rarity become friends with Twilight, or any of the others, if they're all scared of her. Even in a world like this one there is such a thing as consent.

"Quick! Before she decides to dye both our asses a new color!"

Genius :rainbowlaugh:

hope to see another update soon

and showering Twilight's twitching body like a shower.

is saying showering twice really nessesary

I.NEED:NEW.CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :flutterrage:

What's with the sudden caps with some words?

Isn't Nightmare Moon supposed to be against the sex everywhere kinda thing?

all those caps everywhere make me feel like I'm trying to guess the password for a terminal in fallout

Please indent your paragraphs.

Huh, that's strange. I'll have to change that.

5965073 While it is true that NM wants to put an end to all non-procreational sex, she isnt above using sex as a means to her end.

I wonder how would a pony uninterested in sex live in a world like this.

5968221
Day by day, I would imagine.

"Morning, hot stuff~"
"Good morning, miss Slick. I see you are creating a puddle on my desk. Again.""Mmm, enjoying the view are we?~"
"*sigh* Yes, the sight of your crotch leaking bodily fluids onto my workspace is as thrilling as always. Now please move, I have seven papers to write before my lunch break-"
"Oh, that silly paperwork can wait. I have something much more fun in mind~"
"No, they cannot, and invading my personal space is not changing their due date. Also, while I'm sure you find humping my leg entertaining, I do not appreciate the fact that my fur is going to be sticky all day."
"S-stop playing hard to geeeeet~"
"Stop trying to interupt me when I'm working. Now move; I have to clean up this mess you made before I can start."

It's nice to you updating again, no one writes pure debauchery quite as well as you.:raritystarry:

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