• Published 27th Sep 2013
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Luna's Private Lesson - Redbook



Princess Luna gives the every eager Twilight a lesson that might be a little hard to take.

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Comments ( 14 )

:derpyderp1: < my reaction right now...
well :twilightoops: that was...kinda interesting

:pinkiegasp: :twilightoops: :derpyderp1: :derpyderp2:

Well that was entertaining i love it :pinkiehappy:

Is it wrong that I enjoyed reading this in a way? :fluttercry: (btw i'm not a guy)

I liked it so much fun to read and very good good work.

I'm sorry, but I must ask, sequel?

I like how the image you chose comes straight from HoofBeat, a clopfic comic. :rainbowderp:
Nice. :rainbowdetermined2:
I may just read this now just for the Hell of it. After all, it's not like it'll be the only errant clopfic in my Read Later list. :rainbowwild:

AIPĀ§

P.S.: Seeing as it's your story image, I trust you've actually READ Hoofbeat... right?

Is there going to be a sequel?

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Sequel? I don't know. I never really thought about one. What do two think the sequel should be about?

4647137 the sequel could be like after the events take place in the second chapter. You could make it where after the foals are born Twilight and Luna turn against Celestia ;) hint hint.....:twilightsmile:

4647137 them raising their foals dealing with parenthood and the annoying blueballs

4909462 really celstia BLOWS HER LOAD IN TWILIGHT TWILIGHT SHOTS A SPELL IN TO LUNA U MISSED THAT

great story. any chance of a sequel?

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