This Ditto can change form at will and maintain the transformation as long as he wishes. Ditto with this ability are called True Ditto. He grew up at The Elite Four arena in the Kento region. Other wild Pokemon hate the Ditto. They are deeply suspicious of them, and believe that Ditto spy on them. Whenever they find Ditto, they try to kill him. One day, they finally corner him. Thinking fast, he turns into Alakazam and uses Teleport to get away, but just as he is about to disappear, he gets hit with a confusion-inducing move, so his coordinates get sent to a random location. This usually kills a Pokemon, because the destination must always be known. Luck is with him, though: he is sent to Equestria by mistake. How will this outcast do in a land full of "friendly" ponies?
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The ditto can't gender shift? Does this mean he can't do gender swapped versions of certain beings, or it actually has a gender?
I thought ditto were genderless pokemon...
I like this so far, it's an interesting concept, I spotted a couple of minor spelling errors though. Other than that I look forward to see where you take this story.
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Then it came to me the Dittos that you can find are retarded!
So to answer your question the "True Dittos" have genders, but they can only mate while changed.
The way I have this Ditto is not the norm that you see on the show or in the manga. I always hated that you can find a Ditto just in it's natural form. I mean wtf when it sleeps it turns into a rock! So why can they not hold other shaped for that long?
As for changing genders, Ditto is still a Pokemon so they cannot change gender. At least I cannot think of any Pokemon that can.
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Here, let me put this gently. Ditto transform, which means their body parts change. That means, well... yeah. Since plant pokemon and metal pokemon (usually without a gender entirely) exist, then you can assume that a ditto might have the ability to have both 'sets,' so to speak. As in, they might have both sets at once or be able to switch at will.
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Also thank you for reading, and I assume you will read the next one as well (at least).
You point them out and ill change it
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I understand where you are coming from but if I was going to do it right from the show, then it would never have a sex. Meaning I would have to figure out how a gender less pony would look since male ponies look bulkier then the mares, compared to Pokemon that all look the same regardless, it just seemed a hassle. So I fell back on what I thought when I first encountered Ditto. Sorry if this is not to your liking.
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Sorry for being nitpicky. Oh, and a genderless pony would probably look mostly like a mare, but with a shorter mane. At least that's my guess.
Oh well.
Your premise is fine, ignoreee me. If I were a ditto, I'd probably prefer one gender anyway.
Maybe dittos can change sex, but not gender...
Hmm.....
continue.
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It means someone is thinking, Luna know I'm not!
Besides if it help you to understand the story ill clarify as much as I can without giving away anything.
No no I like when I'm questioned.
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Is that a good Hmmm... or a bad?
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Worse then I hoped and better then I feared.
Ok
You have my attention
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I thought that you, the readers, may not have liked what Twilight did.
Good to know
This is an interesting story so far...
Keep it up!
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Ty I am having fun typing it. Glad some people like it.
the grammar and spelling errors are so consistantly bad the story is almost unreadable. Its hoof not huff just little things like that, when you dont correct the easy stuff it makes it seem like you dont give a shit. Not as much of an issue but still kind of bothersome is the pacing, this story is moving fast from canterlot to the everfree in 1 paragraph with no explanations along the way.
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mind telling me what one it is?
Well first I am sorry that I suck with spelling and such, but the fact that you are reading is a great indicator that you like the story...well that or you just like the way I misspell things.
Second ty for telling me. Ill change that soon, I'm playing lol right now. So just tell me when you see a misspelling in the future.
the core concept? Good, lots of potential. Execution? Incredibly sloppy and poor. Pacing is shot to hell and back, the breaking of tense and incorrect words really makes this almost literally painful to read.
first person is not ideal, but workable once the rest of the mess is cleaned up. I advise getting an editor or something, hell a Co-Writer to flesh out your core content, would be good. In short, it has potential, lots of it, but it's so low on the quality that the only direction it can go is up, unless you keep dragging it through the mud.
I'll keep checking back to see if it ever gets improved.
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You don't even know how much disappointed a storyteller feels when he/she is told that the listeners cannot understand his story. And for that I am truly sorry
Can you ever forgive me?
Makes me sad, knowing that I am bad at spelling and grammar.
So much like this lazy prick! Who dislikes everyone who can't give a fight but still don't whant to be lonely!
Did you took Picolo charisma for your dito from Dragon ball: Abridged?
That cover art truly terrifies me.
Interesting...
Bad spelling or just the wrong words in places, but...interesting
The story itself could be the greatest thing I have ever read.
But the spelling in grammar mistakes are just too terrifying...
It is spelled though not "thou" and rhyme not "rime". The little spelling and grammar errors are dragging down what otherwise is a very well written and engageing story; acquire an editor or take a bit more time spell checking.
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No I only seen up to ep 2 . . .I think. I've been meaning to watch it but my friends tell me everything funny so I just get mad, u understand right?
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, how could I ever tell her I like mlp?
Sry about the spelling. I have been trying to do better on it, I just don't have a one to spell cheek it for me. . .well I do but there is NO WAY IN HELL ill ask her. By her I mean my gf she thinks im this bad ass macho man
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sry?
rhymes, although on a super-technical level rime is an archaic form of rhyme, and therefore correct. On a super-technical level.
raze: Tear down so as to make flat with the ground
raise: to increase, such as a temperature or a paycheck.
I'd recommend finding a good dictionary or dictionary program (I use the free program WordWeb) to help you look up words you're not sure of.
Just to sate my curiosity, what level of education are you? High School? College?
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College, and yes I know I have a problem with spelling, my eyes don't see words right
I wish I could see what I write rather then see what I think I wrote
Great story plz right more
As for your spelling predicament you can use the Microsoft office program if you have it
I actually have my English teacher spell check for me and check for grammar, you can probably ask one too
Well,back to more reading,
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I get that too, sometimes. Usually it's good to take a break and come back to it a couple days later.
Do you only get that when you're typing, or when you write by hand, too? Because you could write some out by hand and then transfer it over, and maybe that'd cut down on some of the errors.
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There's also a free program called Jarte that has a decent spell checker.
Problem with relying on those is, though, that you can spell a word correctly and still have the wrong word.
In Example:
Hurry up! We're running out of thyme!
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both sadly
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Yes but the Microsoft program underlines them, you right click and it gives you options like if you put:
Beuatifull, see how it's not spell correctly?
The program will underline it, you right click and it'll give you the correct word.
Or do you already know this and me explainin it was a waste of "thyme"?
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Except thyme, a plant, is spelled correctly, so as far as I know it wouldn't pick up as an error.
And thyme is pronounced like time, obviously, because my previous sentence would be weird if it wasn't.
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Change of subject question:
Who doesn't know how to spell 'time'
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Alright then, let's try this:
Ponies are sentient creatures; they think and make choices, just like we humans do.
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Go on
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Do you not see an error in that?
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Um... The commas don't have a space after them?
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I admit, it's such a widespread error that I'm not surprised. The word sentient is actually incorrect in that statement. The word that actually needs to go there is sapient.
Sentience:
1. State of elementary or undifferentiated consciousness
2. The faculty through which the external world is apprehended = sensation, sense, sensory faculty, sentiency
3. The readiness to perceive sensations; elementary or undifferentiated consciousness
Sapience:
Ability to apply knowledge, experience, understanding or common sense and insight
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Ah, okay now that you mention it I do see the error.
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Wow I go away for a wedding and I come back to his...I should leave more often.
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Hello mister author
We were discussing about auto correct and grammar checking and such.
So I see lol
I agree with Zeromant that this story could use work. Get an editor and clean up the grammar, spelling, and pacing. However, the word "potential" is relative, since this is a fanfic. Just remember, writing is an art, and it can always get better.
We can't tell you every time you make a mistake. There are too many. Get an editor, please. Honestly, it's a good concept and a good story, and it's not a crime to be bad at spelling at grammar. However, every time you make a mistake, it takes us right out of the story, and that is not what you want. You want it to flow seamlessly, to keep people so engrossed they don't remember where they are. Just get some help.
By the way, am I reading into this wrong, or is that striped pony about to rape poor ditto before Twilight and the others show up???
If we liked everything the characters did, there wouldn't be much of story, would there?