Just a 20-something-odd guy from Iowa
The Doctor, punished by the Time Lords, has been exiled and force to regenerate. However something has gone wrong and he is now in the Crystal Empire. Now he must work on getting back to his own universe while helping the Empire against an old enemy.
Set in an alternative season 6B of Doctor Who. (Between The War Games and Spearhead from Space) so the Doctor will be in his third persona/ regeneration/ personality (the Jon Pertwee one).
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You got Derpy's name right the first time, then proceeded to call her "Derby" every other time, even in the author's note.
Just letting you know.
Yes, more. Work on spelling, great story.
Oh dear, Pertwee Doctor is here...and considering his disregard for authority, that isn't going to go well with Shining.
Good start. Looking good so far. I'm wondering if the Doctor will meet Hooves??
“Thank you, your dismissed,” Cadence said. (s/b "you're") -- that seems to be a lot of people's grammar errors, getting similar sounding/spelling words mixed up. All the rest of the your vs you're written are correct. I have to say you're doing better than most writers here
Shame this was never finished. I'd have liked to read more.