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Dinky and Sparkler weren't always a part of Ditzy "Derpy" Doo Hooves's family. That much is quite obviousto Ditzy's best friend . Ditzy tells how she came to have two wonderful daughters in her life, all thanks to the Doctor.

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Carrot Top... you'll never know this but those two months for you could have been years for Derpy and the Doc. That's one of the fun things of being a traveller and adventurer in the fourth dimension of time and space!

So, Sparkler (Amethyst Star) is a cryo-orphan? Wouldn't be the first the Doctor has encountered and I doubt she'll be the last.

I like the idea, and I can't wait for more. :pinkiehappy:

Whoah. Let's hope that there isn't a stigma attached to 'births' like this.

This is vaguely reminiscent of the episode that introduced Jenny, the Doctor's cloned "daughter".

1915079 there really shouldnt be. i mean i just borrowed an idea from a doctor who episode. :derpytongue2:1915187 has the right idea of it :pinkiehappy:

That makes complete sense, but a why has yet been made clear. I want more story, and I can't wait. :pinkiehappy:

as soon as i read the description i was like FUCK YES finally someone did a story like this

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Because of wibbly wobbly timey wimey stuff. That's the usual reason.

Anyways, great story, although it did kinda feel a bit rushed.

Comment posted by SailorYue deleted Jan 17th, 2013

1974268its not quite finished yet youll see :rainbowwild:1974240ill have to fix that, trouble with writing not all close to the same time. also, its a different planet/time than equestria.

Need more! I am enjoying this.:pinkiesmile:

I do like how you're writing Sparkler's voice (she's never spoken in the show, IIIRC). She sounds a bit like an experiment, doesn't she? Very precise and technical as if she knows the words but not really how to use them.

"They built this place in a volcano?"

"Um... Yes?"

"Wow! They're dumber than those types on that other planet that were fighting a war but didn't know why!"

Very interesting, I like the idea on how dinky was made I'm excited to read more.

>> BenRG actually she talked to rainbow in the episode that mare do well was in.:rainbowkiss:

yay, love the story!:pinkiehappy:

Very nice story, but this chapter did seem rather rushed.

Very nice. I notice there's only one down vote. :flutterrage: WHY WOULD ANYONE DOWN-VOTE THIS STORY?!

2390038 because the last chapter is a bit rushed. ive been trying to get around to fixing it too, just been busy with a move, tax BS, plus my muse dumped a whole ton of ideas into my lap for this movie i fell in love with. :fluttershyouch:

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