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When Twilight visits the Princess one day, she learns that Celestia is busy with some important guests. She goes into the Royal Library and gets interested in the tale of a young unicorn named Celeste. However, the book is a bit damaged, so she asks the Princess if she knows the story. Oddly, Celestia refuses.

So Twilight goes to the only other pony she knows who will have information. And it's not Pinkie Pie.

My first attempt at an adventure story. Sorry if it sucks.

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1. Her Name Was Celeste · 17th Oct 2013 · 1,179 words
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2. Moonlit Pools · 14th Feb 2014 · 1,702 words
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agentfirefox

agentfirefox #1 · Oct 17th, 2013 · · · 1. Her Name Was Celeste ·

Need more, it sounds interesting

Zennistrad

Zennistrad #2 · Oct 22nd, 2013 · · · 1. Her Name Was Celeste ·

Sounds very interesting. If I may criticize, however, I'd suggest that you put Celestia's inner thoughts in italics to distinguish them from the narration. Other than that, it looks great.

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