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Bob Ray


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This story seems like it could get pretty interesting, there are few stories about Agent 47 and this being one of the few makes this story a bit unique. I am really interested how this story will play out and I'll give it a favorite and see where this story goes.

This story seems intriguing... I do hope to see more chapters as we can see how Agent 47 accommodates this taboo world he has no knowledge of. 4.5/5 stars

Due to the graphic nature of the second chapter I am going to be switching the rating from teen to Mature here shortly

This is exciting! In a bit of a prediction, I think the 'cult' possess Agent 47's Silverballers. I may be wrong but nevertheless I digress. Can't wait for the next chapter!
5/5 stars

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Yeah, I am excited to post the next chapter. It should be better than the other two and longer.
I should have it out within the next two days

though i have never played hitman, i still find this fic to be very enjoyable:yay: keep up the good work and have a like and fav:moustache:

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Hey hey, thanks man. I am doing my best to keep Agent 47 the same as in the games. That way you would be able st look at them side to side and see no difference

did... Agent 47 just show... emotion? I think now that he's in Equestria, some of his mannerisms have been set aside, or maybe this was just a moment of weakness... None the less, great story and I really want to know hoe he'll react to all of the ponies in Ponyville or, better yet, how THEY'LL react...:raritywink:

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The magic in Equestria can also fuel emotions, since he had no emotions the magic of harmony has seeped into him.

Does 47 have his silver ballers?

3827322 In Chapter 1, first half of the chapter, 47 discovers that they are missing

Hmm... So Zecora has a love interest? Surprising to say the least. I like the direction this story is going, the cult, the secrets, Zecora's inner conflict! I can't wait for more!

Liking it so farª!
I hope everything is okay over there!

Comment posted by picklejuice deleted Apr 25th, 2014
Comment posted by Kilobytes deleted May 22nd, 2014

Oh, that don't sound good...
Though, glad you back!:twilightsmile:

This is a curious chapter. Agent 47 is falling (Painfully slowly) for Zecora, but he holds back when he notices he's going too far. I also like the detail you give when he performs executions.
6.5 / 10 stars

you two must be patched.

You mean parched?

Wow, people are actually still have interest in this?
Now i'm go damn obligated to write something....fuck all

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Might as well try to finish it.

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Yeah, that is what I was thinking. But to finish it early would mean I cut out 10 chapters and end on chap 20ish

Well now I'm done with the cover. Was sick for a while. Now I can write!

About half way done with Part 2 of that chapter!
It's happening!

901 view, I would have never guessed. Wow.
Thanks every one

This story has some potential in it, though you might want to look for an editor and a proofreader. There are many fellow bronies who would gladly help you.

6331984 Any help is gladly accepted!
Thanks for the read!!

Read it all in one gulp. All I can say is that I want more. Thumbs up and fav are already transfered to your account. I shall be awaiting the next chapter before you get the rest of your payment.

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Thanks for the read and comment!

LOL! Didn't expect this kind of story

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Scared to ask what you expected lel

Been waiting for this for a long time. Nice chapter, I would have liked more action but I guess that has to wait

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Don't worry, I have a lot more action coming up in the next chapter

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Good to know! I'm looking forward to this chapter. ;w;

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I'm working on it now so it should be ready in a week or so. Hopefully sooner.

WHAT.
THIS IS ALIVE NOW.
MY GOD. Nice job author.

Cool chapter! I only wonder if this 'forces' will find 47 and expose him or something.

Really good story :twilightsmile:. To bad the author hasn’t come by in 2+ years and the story hasn’t been updated in 5 (years) :ajsleepy:. Yeah it still needed editing but it’s their first story so it’s understandable :twilightblush:. Wish they’d come back to continue (or let someone else continue) this. Oh well :rainbowderp:, if you do come back, I hope to see more of your story. If not :fluttershysad:, than good luck with everything and stay safe out there :trollestia:. Thanks again for an (so far) awesome story :rainbowdetermined2:.

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