Princess Celestia sends three Anthromals to work in Ponyville. Some of the ponies befriend them and others fear them. Applejack takes up to liking one of them, and falls in love. Every pony in town as very different feeling about Applejack and this Anthrromal dating each other.
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Just like Diamond Dogs ... but way cooler.
Not going to read anymore, this story rub me in the wrong way right from the start.
3198920 Rubbed you the wrong...Need some lotion?
3199036
No thanks, I'm good without
No. Jesus, no.
So I am not sure who you are and Ill keep all rude comments to myself when posting anything with criticism in it, I want to let you know that there were a few mistakes in your spelling and missing " in maybe one of the sentences, Over all besides the spelling and missing quotations the story is well planned out I like it and would further read the store on chapter 2.
Same as last post on Chapter 1 Good story watch the spelling and Grammar, I don't want to come off rude so please don't take these posts like I'm insulting your effort I give you an A for at least coming up with such a great story.
Hey Hun, Let me know when you get another install for the chapter, I want to help you with the story if thats allright, I know that you want to make this more romantic then just all "smutinstuff" So If you want Just contact me on my email Royalthunderblazzer@yahoo.com or my Skype if you have it AzureOceanBreeze
I like it all but I hope he didn't turn in to a pony and AJ would be a awesome jaguar or
The pace isn't smooth but a rough chunky type that's so rough [/colorI wouldn't make a dish from it.
[youtube=VW9wlPtDc50] I'm sure this fits with the name.