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Madness. Utter madness. And I loved it!
I could tell that this wasn't worth reading from the first sentence in the description:
Even if this sentence was corrected (
describedescribed,) it would serve absolutely no purpose whatsoever. It's essentially saying "this description is going to be a description."3175574 Think it was my first bland fic. But that said, due to it being a counterpart, it suddenly turned unique and innovative... which is a bit bad imo... but eh... it's released.
3176629 *Shrugs* Can tinker some with that. But as said, it's at least more polite than some authors that write some piece of shit and disguise it as a proper story. Claiming it's an actual fic with story in it, when all it is is monotone slog, porn norms and drawn out stereotypes. Had several time had an author start with it "It's a serious love fic" to go to "It's just silly porn". And I've intended, and promised to make sure people don't have to read something they dislike, instead of wasting time reading something they won't like, like many other authors do, by giving a poor description with misleading information.
CWOP(clop with-out Plot[storyplot]) Bleh, this really was a let down. the least you could have done was EXPLAINED why Spike was with Trixie as appose to Twilight. Also you mentioned OOC, A competent author would again explain why the change, even a half assed "because of past events their attitude changed from this to that" would have helped. it actually fell below the acceptable CWOP standards in my book.
These emote me:
I love female domination/role reversal, and I certainly love TrixiexSpike. This ship deserves better writing, though. Some of the prose sounded awkward and inexperienced, Spike sounded like a completely different, generic character, and it really would've been nice to get some context. Still, any TrixiexSpike story gets an upvote from me.
3179781 I did warn that this didn't have much of a story, at all. That was partially the whole reason for this story... to be one that had generic porn norms, but reversed, but ACTUALLY told about it. Assuming you read the description, I'd like to know what "warning" I should include to indicate it is such a story.
And that would vary between authors. Like said, most stories like this have no legitimate reason whatsoever for any action done. Most I see tend to go with a "I haev penis! - Oh mai! Let me suk it!", which apparently is a "serious, and deep love story" according to certain authors...
This is done as more or less satire of that whole genre of bad porn. What however makes me a bit sad, is knowing I'd most likely gotten a large amount of praise over how great a story it was if I'd just swapped the roles, and added a deceiving description to this. Like, honestly? Do people really like generic, bland ooc crap that much? Ah well...
3181740 Yeah, this was more or less written as satire to the whole "cardboard characters" and "bland porn", thus I avoided writing him IC, like a large majority of ooc clopfic writers do. Along with him having no sexual drive to satisfy himself, like most female characters in clopfics also lack. As mentioned a bit above, it does make me sad to know a ton of people would likely have faved and praised this for being a great story if I'd role reversed it. So yeah,this is intentionally written "worse" than it could to fit the bland norm. But quite sure most won't be able to pick up the satire in this, or whatever the term goes by. Still, rather annoying to know people can churn out even "worse" monotone shit and have it called a "great love story" or whatnot. Erf, trailing off a bit here, sorry. But yeah, I could have written this as a ton more IC, and overall "better quality", but as said: It was done like this on purpose. So sorry if you'd actually had liked to read a "proper" version.
3182514 Don't worry, I got the satire while reading it. I wouldn't have if you hadn't specifically said in the description that it was a satire of how male and female characters interact in badly-written erotic fiction, so knowing what it was was the key. Spike's character is clearly a bland vacuum usually given to the generic female characters who submit to the the male and pleasure him.
3183066 Well, good to hear that managed to be rather clear. And yeah, personally find said generic characters to be really bland and boring. And partially with this wanted to point out how stupid that stereotype is. Had some thought on writing a "proper" IC-ish fic with Trixie though.
you bastard i was eating
3243503 You DID read the content description, did you not? Unlike certain other authors that lie about the content in their ex. r63 cadance and shining stories or simply not say what contains at all, all of my latest stories got a "Contains" description to avoid just such things. So you know what to expect when reading. Know it's a rare thing to do, but just saying. I at least have such content available in my fics.
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i kinda figured it to be the other way around, i was frightened.
its a good story but goddamn that was pretty weird, there were times when i thought trixie was going to turn out to have a dick because of the way i read it.
3247703 Well, that was sorta part of the point of this fic xP It was to be a generic clopfic, but with reverse roles, simply to "show" how it'd be so to say. It does state in the start (or well middle) of the text. Guess it's a bit obscure depending how you read. But yeah, the main point of this was to reverse the roles and go against the most common generic things.
And heh, yeah, I sorta aimed to "overdo" her vulva, partially to mock how overdone the penis tends to be in comparison. This fic got a "surprising" amount of depth and meaning to it so to say. Being simultaneously something to think about at the same time it is just bland, one sided porn
So yeah, it's trying to push boundaries and "ask questions" or how to put it... anyhow, rambling a bit here heh.
Glad to hear you thought it was good. And can say: The reason certain words were used was due to the sole reason there's simply no words for it whatsoever in terms of a female counterpart. I would be using them if there was any. (and the few there is out there tend to be very "lame" or "restricted" so to say. Like, the current only really used term for female arousal is "wet". And that is very limited, considering ex: we also get erections among other things. Just feels rather "meh" to use a majority of the times. But yeah, I think I managed to explain decently what I meant with stuff I hope.