Hearts Red As Apples
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I have a Ps3.
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Dafuq was that?
Guess this was made for "Play"
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Huh.....whu...Iduneven....
.......Interesting story.
Well...The idea was good at least?
I'll be honest, it seems rushed with a number of grammar and spelling errors, and I kinda think you overdid the accents a little bit.
The premise is good, but the execution could use a lot of work.
I'd say one mustache out of five
But don't get discouraged, dude
meh... I liked the idea, but it was really rushed...
This is too Farm Lessons for a site like this.
The plot was rushed, Twilight's reaction was unreal, the ending was a twist on an old cliche gone nasty, and there was no buildup to make it seem believable.
I'm just going to believe that Derpy came up with this in her head.
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ugh... this was a bit rushed and now I need to find my mind :javascript:smilie('
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so much potential for a great story wasted!
This story was like an out of control bullet train! Too bad, it's an interesting idea.
How do you type this on ps3
I kind of like this more than I thought, maybe you should redo the story with a bit more expansion and elaboration. This has a lot of potential, are planning or working on a sequel?
Rape.