Spike wakes up to find both Apple sisters in his bed. What happaned last night!?
Way too short.
Wut
too short too rapid in the pacing department now I am going to wait while my brain tries to catch up
That ending though.
wtf
undrinken
I think you mean "undrunk", I think it you should probably get a proofreader, editor, or both to look over your work, you have quite a few minor errors in your chapters, and it would be a good idea before they escalate to big problems.
END OF CHAPTER BITCH!!!
Now that's funny, 'Surprise Mothafuka its the end of the fuking chapter, so go fuk urself!'
Wait they took advantage of Spike......lucky basterd
Rape.
Way too short.
Wut
too short too rapid in the pacing department
now I am going to wait while my brain tries to catch up
That ending though.
wtf
I think you mean "undrunk", I think it you should probably get a proofreader, editor, or both to look over your work, you have quite a few minor errors in your chapters, and it would be a good idea before they escalate to big problems.
Now that's funny, 'Surprise Mothafuka its the end of the fuking chapter, so go fuk urself!'
Wait they took advantage of Spike......lucky basterd
Rape.