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not as bad as I thought it was gonna be... especially with all the dislikes it's already gotten...

This should be interesting.

Why do I feel that Cloudy Quartz isn't the only mare in this family that wants to get laid?

6122789 Don't worry, after Cloudy, we're going straight to the ponies who appeared in Princess Spike + Amira the Saddle Arabian delegate who didn't appear for some reason.

* sipping sunflower Tea before reading the last part and spitting tea everywhere* PFFFFFFFFFFF what?

:c I thought it would be maud that spike was going to bang... All well, I'll keep reading.

I'm tella ya if Spike gets some mare pregnant that would be so awesome.

A little late for that Twilight, his morals are pretty much dead and buried.

Kirins all around!
And what other hybrids that there might be.

Why do I feel that all the clients he rut with would come together in an old school orgy?

Why doesn't anyone ever say 'As Luna as my witness'?

6136971 I don't know, for some reason they all think Celestia is God, when in reality it should be Lauren Faust since she created G4, or better yet, Bonnie Zecherle, who created G1!

6136602 really it looked like a girl to me

I really hope that Twilight forgives Spike when the truth finally comes out and Momlestia fesses up as to what she really had Spike do. It's so obvious that they have deep feelings for each other, yet conflicting consequences keep them apart. Plus after the fiasco with Rarity (like any other fic made by Trazho, it seems) Spike needs to have at least one girl that likes him for more than just awesome mind-blowing sex (not to say that that specifically is a bad thing at all).

Also Rarity married Thunderlane and moved to Cloudsdale....correct me if I'm wrong, but Rarity is an Unicorn, right? Not an Alicorn, so technically she doesn't have the ability to live on clouds. How in the hell is she able to still live in Cloudsdale unless she has a permanant 'walk-on-clouds' spell in effect, otherwise...it would be the Mane 5 not the Mane 6.

If only Rarity knew what happened to the Joker in Arkham Knight

well now that the crystal empire is covered the only things left are non ponies

When Rarity fell did she happen to fall into the Poison Joke flowers that cause her to turn ghost?

6144594 Excuse me? Did you not read the part in Chapter 5 about her falling through the clouds and into a pack of wolves who tore her body apart?

Well.............. Alicorn kirin hybrid

I feel like your now just fucking with us 7-7

So that's how this tale of sex and friendship ends. Gotta say, i wouldn't have had it any other way, SOON SPIKES CHILDREN WILL SPREAD AND CONQUER EQUESTRIA! :moustache: :moustache:

About time that there is an actual Spike X Crystal Pony scene!! Usually that would be mostly Spike X Cadence in Crystal form (though I haven't seen that yet---get to it writers!!!) How sweet!! But it may be not so sweet if that Crystal mare succeeded in getting Spike to knock her up. What would Twilight think of that? How about Mommy Tia?


And then.....

"You & Thunderlane moved to Cloudsdale after you 2 got married, how does that work exactly?"
"Oh-no darling, Thunderlane was too stupid, and I was too love struck to see that as soon as he plopped me onto a bed in Cloudsdale for our honeymoon, that I fell through the clouds and into a den of wolves where they tore me apart and I died!"
"Wait! Then how are you here?"
"Oh, I'm a ghost! Who's now haunting you darling!"
"Wh-what?!"

.............................................................................................:rainbowderp::rainbowderp: :facehoof::facehoof::facehoof:


....anyway, you're welcome. :trollestia:

Edit: Just thought about this:

"Oh don't worry, it's not a curse or anything! Though for the life of me I don't know why I'm not haunting Thunderlane for revenge, eh, last I saw he checked himself into the looney bin! But whatever the case, I'm dead and you're the only one who's allowed to see me!"

Seriously Rarity?? The reason that you are in limbo is because you have unfinished business....and that has to deal with a certain purple dragon and lavender alicorn. You rejected Spike to be with your Laney-poo, which led to you pushing daisies, instead of giving him a chance. And now you are hanging around with Twilight because she has feelings for Spike so the least you could do is help your friend with some romantic assistance from beyond the grave.

"No-one's been that risky & daring since this one guy with a monkey, magic carpet, & magic lamp with a genie!"

one guy with a monkey, magic carpet, & magic lamp with a genie!

if that's not an Aladdin reference we don't know what is

Comment posted by SweetBathory deleted Jul 1st, 2015

6147034 your avatar matches your comment far to well...

6162497 Yea, that sentence described me pretty well...

Comment posted by New Lunar Principality deleted Jul 20th, 2015

6145530 Actually, that was chapter 10.

We all know Yusei is the best , but unfortunately Yugi beats everyone

6247598 You do realize I was talking about my personal favorite do you? Or are you just gonna be an assfuck and make me put these 2 in MY number 1?

Then Yuma went to work, pulling herself up and down on his twin towers!

Too soon.

Just a few things. One get an editor, there were more than a few spelling mistakes ( thrown instead of throne, etc). Second, the whole bit with the Sisters was a confused mess. For example, it is safe to assume that anyone reading this story already knows that Celestial and Luna are sisters so you have to mention it and as for Luna not being there, saying that she was unavailable for she was sleep, was over explaining. You could have just as simply said she was still asleep.

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