In the story Silence, Sweetie Belle had an accident. What was going through her mind during the time she spent in the hospital?
This story takes place during the story Silence, so you could read that one first, or this one first. Either way, you should read both of them. This is not supposed to be as sad as Silence was. Picture is by LexiMoon, check her deviant out here sometime.
Because I am a fairly new writer, i'm still practicing. If you comment, also leave a note on the narration of the story and how it could be better.
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This was really good. I woul out a crying emoticon but I'm on my phone and I'm incapable of doing that, but I had feels. Good job.
Yes! Brilliantly done, friend!
This gave me feels... ah, well.
Seems rather scary that Luna is Mr. (or, rather, Mrs.) D(eath). Well, at least she organizes her shelves.
3163834 I'm actually planning on writing a story about Luna in my "Silence Universe", I'm just figuring out on how to write it. It's not as much as she is death, it's that she can see dead ponies.
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Well, doesn't it make sense that Luna would replace Mr. D, considering she can enter the final resting place?
But then again... she is an overpowered alicorn of the dark. Strike that- a lonely anitsocial OP alicorn of the dark. A perfect choice!
what was the accident ?
Really good but what was the accident?
OKAY
the feels got me in this one everbody abort the feels train this was so sad 
Again so sad
GOD DAMN IT THAT WAS SADDER THAN RARITYS POV NOT VISE VERSA
3960282 4764260 I'd guess the surgery involved her brain, and somepony's knife slipped...