Everything we see has a story. The trees have a story, the animals have a story, and even rocks have a story. This is the story of Tom. Tom the boulder.
I write really short stories when I should be doing my government homework. Not edited or pre-read. This story could contain intense levels of not being good or interesting.
Toms living the dream
...lol. that's...interesting.
pretty boss
This was mediocre in a good way.
And do your homework!
Mediocre but so funny I couldn't stop laughing. XD
Great ending!
Perhaps you should try reading your story out loud. You catch things better and if it sounds off trying to speak it, then you can fix it.
I always wanted to learn what happened to Tom...
... AH! just kidding. I didn't.
Now I know though.
My Little Boulder...
My Little Boulder...
aahh aaahh Aaahh AAHH
MY LITTLE BOULDER!
I wonder why rarity brought me
MY LITTLE BOULDER!
and then threw me out the boutique
No adventures!
I'm a rock!
a beautiful rock so shaped and strong!
passing time is
an easy feat
for a rock, go wait for eternity!
MY LITTLE BOULDER!
at the mirror pond
for the rest of my daaaays!
<cue My Little Boulder logo>
Who knew that a story about a rock would get views
3784422 What would you say if I said that I made a folder for Tom in my group and your story is the first one to be added to the folder and the group?
5567853 Lol, that would be awesome!
5589985 Well it is and was the first one of my group.