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Do I sense PinkieSpike? The little guy needs somebody and as the founder of the PinkieXSpike group I approve. But you make this shipping happen and not just hint or tease at it or I will hunt you down.
All aboard the ship train!
...wait.
huh... wow, nice chapter.
The only problem is that Pinkie's sisters are named Inky and Blinky Pie.
and her dad is named Clyde in reference to pack-man
"A new ship has entered the battle!"
Spiky Pie!
Why can't I hold all these feels, man?
DRAGON PIES, MAXIMIZE! FLY FOREVER THROUGH DRAGON SKIES!
9,000 internets to whomever figures out the source of the above and why it's funny/appropriate.
Never thought I could dislike Spike anymore in this story then I did til this chapter. He might as well just kill himself right now cause he's destined to be alone the rest of his life now. 'There are other fish in the sea'? That won't work cause soon as another pony showed the slightest interest in the mare/whatever Spike was after he'd just do the exact same thing he did when he found about about Twilights feelings for Rarity. He'd become a complete pussy bitch, tell himself that whoever he was pursuing would be better off with the other male and dedicate himself to getting them together.
Spike and Pinkie!!! YES YES AND MORE YES glad to see spike wont be alone in this fic
Dude, I'm loving it. I'm huge on Pinkie Spike, and I love seeing her as the one to pull Spike out of his funk after a RariTwi heartbreak.
Real subtle there Pinkie.
SpikiePie incoming?
Well, that's a bit of a twist.......but to anyone that's calling for a SpikePie ship right now, hold your horses!!!!! Pinkie's doing her thing to help Spike feel better about himself. That's a given. There has to be something there before we start shipping them....if he doesn't become insane first
The whole "there more than one fish in the sea" is cliche' as hell, but there's a reason why it's cliche'-----it's the truth!!!! Though now there is a bit of me that wants them (Rarity and Twilight) to date and then ultimately find out that they are not for each other and break up and then both of them are alone........oh god , I am such a bitter bastard right now , and that's ultimately not Spike's ideal persona. Sarcastic, sure, but never bitter. Last time we saw something close to bitterness, he flattened half of Ponyville on his birthday. (wait, that was greed.)
Anyway, still looking out for a potential threesome---get that taste in him, so that when he does find someone that actually likes him as more than a friend, he knows he'll finally have found someone that won't break his heart--like Rarity did.
SpikePie, I buy that ship
I DEMAND AN ORGY!
3675619 I'm with this! Make another story for them!
3675674 Your OC is really tall
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Nope, Inky and Blinky and entirely fan-made names.
YES! SpikePie! YES!
3673894 I beg to differ.
3678270 oh well sorry about that i was wrong
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FLIGHT IS MIGHT!
3678310 No worries.
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It's dangerous to go alone! Take this! (Hands over 9,000 internets to you.)
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That is one of my all-time favorite openings, too!
3687168 I win!
I still own the old VHS tape of that, hard to forget dragon riders like that.
How much time has elapsed since Spike found out about them? That's one thing that gets me with stories like this; he's been crazy about Rarity for three years, but as soon as he finds out he's lost her, his reaction is a quick tantrum and "Never mind, all better now!" within hours. Way too quick a recovery.
So going into a story with the mature and sex tags, I was somewhat wary since I'm not into clop, but the premise seemed interesting.
I was pleasantly surprised. This is not a sex story, this is a story with sex. Instead of meaningless sex for the sake of meaningless sex, you're using it as an actual plot device to drive a real story. And it helps that not every chapter is a mindless orgy; even in the porn area you throw in a little of Ponyville for a break, which is a nice breather.
I don't favorite a lot of stuff, but you've earned one. The story is really interesting, and I'm curious to see where you take it.
3701731 Glad you enjoy it.
Here's a better way to see the whole triangle thing, once again based on Pinkie's cupcake analogy:
Say that Rarity is a sapphire cupcake--a cupcake that the sapphires are really imitation, but they look like real sapphires. Spike's apparently is the only creature that can actually eat a sapphire cupcake because it's sapphire. Because of this, he wants it, probably more than anything. He already likes everything else, but that sapphire cupcake is his Hope Diamond. Now there's another person that wants the cupcake too, his sister Twilight, and being Twilight, she wants to know why Spike likes the cupcake so much. She and Spike work together to get it, but then Spike finds out he has the money for it, but Twilight is broke. Being the good guy he is, Spike willingly gives Twilight the money to buy the cupcake---probably because he's a good guy, but I bet in the back of his mind, he'll get to have a piece of the cupcake too and hopes that Twilight shares with him. But in a twist of fate, Twilight eats the cupcake, none for Spike to share, and on top of it, he discovers that because Twilight was able to eat it without problem, the sapphires weren't real, it was just sugar. Spike is devastated, because he gave Twilight the money, and didn't get any benefit from it, and because it found out that was never something that he wanted in the first place.
I guess there's a good reason why Pinkie's a master confectioner for Sugarcube Corner, isn't it? She knows that there is a couple of cupcakes for everyone.
Is that what you were saying with it? At least the way Pinkie puts it? Cause if that's the case, Pinkie knew this was coming well before Rarity even did that spread, probably when Twilight mentioned for the first time about her crush for her after the spread. (For some reason, I think Pinkie knew the minute the spread was published, probably a Pinkie Sense thing)
Just looking at it two weeks later, and re-reading it again and the parallel with Spike's heartbreak, this was simply the ideal chapter to try to connect Spike, Rarity, and Twilight again, because the chapter where Spike lashed out at them, could have easily turned ugly.
I've probably said it two weeks ago, but I'll say it again: Way to go with the resolution on this, and I'm intrigued with how you are gonna end it. We have a RareLight (kinda obvious at this point considering the author ), but at the moment, no one else romantically; definitely friendshipping right now with Applejack and Fluttershy; Rainbow Dash seems to be purposely ignorant after telling Fluttershy that it's not happening right now, and Pinkie being Pinkie in the best way possible.
3751706 You put a lot of thought into that metaphor, and I think it's pretty accurate.
You'll see what I have in mind for Rarity and Twilight, Applejack and Fluttershy, and Spike and Pinkie Pie soon. I plan on laying down the framework for the rest of the story in the next chapter.
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EHHH.....ahhhhh...ah,ah,ah!!!!
DON'T SPOIL IT!!!! All my analysis is speculation based on what's been written and published. And it runs from my brain. If you have hints, go ahead, but just don't up and put up something MAJOR, at least not YET!!!!
I may be spoiling it for everyone else going forward with my analysis....
EDIT: Now that I think about it, is it really spoiling it, if people are already predicting what is happening, even if it determines that said readers were right with their previous comments? If that's the case, well, it probably means that we are pretty perceptive with what people see and what they say. IE, figurately, we are as bad at predictions as Applejack is to attempting to lie.
3752270 Me? Spoil things? Preposterous!
Oh dear, I needed this. Thank you.
But, who's gonna be shipped with Dashie now? Dashie needs love too!
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I too saw that show!