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This was some of the most fun I've had writing clop in a long time. I hope you enjoy it, too!
Guh...
I... HATE... BDSM...
Not gonna stop me from reading though...
Even if I did have to deal with a bit of queasiness there...
It was just a one time thing, so I'm good.
Awesome!
Good BDSM dude. And very well job with Italian Stallion That leads the way to RariTwi!!!! WIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!! *bouncing as Pinkie Pie*
Lemme tell ya, I can barely wait to see what will happen in Ponyville in the aftermath of Rarity doing porn. I get the feeling that the events following the Playcolt photoshoot were barely a preview of what's to come. ^_^
The BDSM scene felt, well, not exactly rushed, but a little breezy and perfunctory considering it's Rarity's first experience with that sort of stuff. I was kinda expecting more sensory detail. That being said, I'm still liking the story. I sense a train wreck in the making here. I'm half-expecting Twilight and Spike to randomly show up while Rarity is getting plowed in the plothole.
I lost a little affection for Rarity here. The idea that men always have to make the first move is dated and ridiculous. I realize you only had Rarity thinking this to ensure she would hold off on asking Italian out until the right moment, but for her to think of it as such big scandal or social stigma is a little annoying.
As for the clop scenes...to be honest, I just find them boring. There's nothing interesting about Rarity getting dominated by a big stallion, and there's certainly nothing enjoyable about how much she's loving it without considering Spike; it still feels pretty cold and careless that she hasn't spared him the slightest thought to what she may need to say to him. So that's another point against her. Besides, the pornography might be crucial to the plot, but spending so much time describing everything that happens in it just slows things down in my opinion. I would rather get around to the scenes in which the characters take action to move the plot forward.
This was pretty light as far as bondage goes, which is about right so far as I'm concerned. And wow, that was one hard letdown. Poor Rates...
So, is it weird that I'm reading this for the plot that isn't the back end of a pony? Seriously, I've been skipping over the clop scenes, waiting to see the fallout of all this.
Hum... RarixItalin? Poor Twilight... Spike! ASSIST!
That was a fun read, and the spaces between the clop were good and fulfilling. Rarity's really into this now and it sounds to me like she's actually looking at this as a way to bring in the bits as well as have a lot of fun and new experiences too whether or not she follows through would depend quite a bit on the reception and profit I guess...
Learning a valuable lesson here: inserting tab A into slot B (while being shot with a C) doesn't always lead to love, true or otherwise. Rares has to come to terms quickly with the fact that while she and her partner are engaging in a highly personal act she should learn to keep personal and business separate...
Fortunately for Rarity (and for me) the BDSM scene was quite light considering how it could have gone, so her first time was only really getting used to breathing properly.
I must say I welcomed the school filly outfit, but the tweed? A good punishment needs to at least mean the jacket comes off clothing such as a skirt which barely covers that which is normally on show would be highly tittilating to ponies, and it works quite well on clop readers too. For some reason I now can't get a school clothes punishment scene out of my head
That was interesting I hope the next chapter works toward Rarity and Twilight like hinted in this chapter. I look forward to more.
That was interesting I hope the next chapter works toward Rarity and Twilight like hinted in this chapter. I look forward to more.
Hard Core is doing a bad job as director considering how he has failed to inform Rarity and get real consent from her. "Too late -- you signed up for this!" isn't something you get to say when sex is involved. That's called rape. To think he couldn't even have a script made to run by her before shooting just to get her on board with everything and to test the waters before telling her to suck it up in both senses.