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A long chapter to make up for a long wait. Hopefully you enjoy!
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Yay, chapter!
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I AM SHOCKED AND APPALLED, SIR.
Also
Anyway...
So, everyone's fine with Rarity being a porn star? Uh... okay.
Or you could have just, you know, swallowed your pride and asked your friends for help? Such an adamant statement seems almost comical here.
3322164 I read this chapter over again looking for errors and I still missed some? That stinks, but thanks for bringing those to my attention.
As for the reaction of her friends, they're trying to show support for Rarity because they treated her so poorly about the photo shoot. They don't necessarily approve. Applejack even says that she'll support her friend even if she doesn't agree with her. Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie are accepting of this, but expect future chapters to explore how bothered Fluttershy, Applejack, and especially Twilight are by this revelation. Then hopefully things will clear up.
On your last note, I have to agree with you. Rarity could have easily asked for help. But then there would have been no plot, so I guess I'm just waving my hands at that one. I wish I had a better explanation for you.
I'm glad things all worked for the best... so far well see if it is all
copeiceticcopacetic after Rarity makes Twilight feel better... can't believe I just wrote that keep up the good work!So close!! Yet still so far away! Ah well it's a damn good chapter regardless, I just am eager to actually see Twi and Rarity talk it out.
Twilight x Rarity in the future? hopefully.
3322192 Was the word you were looking for "copacetic?"
“Well, I hope they do work it out,” Pinkie said, beginning to sweep up the confetti. “I just want all my friends to be happy.”
“I think we all want that,” Dash said. “Let’s hope Rarity can make it happen.”
Well, there's a chance...
Well, that didn't end as badly as I thought it would.
Yeah, this story was going good til Spike decided to become a panzy-ass bitch and help Twilight get with Rarity instead. Should have been specified on the main page of this fic that not only was it be Rarilight but that Spike was actually gonna shit on himself in this fic. They need to add Straight, Lesbian and Gay tags to this site so that some of us don't waste 10-15 chapters reading a story we wouldn't have read in the first place if we'd known where it was headed.
Where did that tangent come from?
That was nice to read. The mane six are displayed as a complete group so often that it's just irritating nowadays. Thank-you for that paragraph. I could stop reading right now and leave the story happy.
I think the word is "aback". You got it right the second time.
Rainbow Dash looked a little bit like a mean drunk there (was that mentioned before?), but I got a kick out of the revelation that she's a Hard Core fan.
3322214 yes, just too lazy the look it up. thanks for the fix.
Even though it was basically a minefield when Rarity returned home and admit to what what happening, the reaction is expected, which is good. Glad to see that AJ has pulled her previous reaction back a little bit.
Why am I not surprised that Dash, of all ponies, would know who Hard Core is?............................... I bet that she does have a few films of her own in her closet (imagine if it was a film with Fluttershy....I mean, how else can she afford a cottage on the ground, considering she's a pegasus---that has to be a pretty bit)
So now we know what her friends think, but now the ball is in Twilight's court. She has to let Rarity know what's up....and I'm certain that Rarity has started to notice, hence the "volunteer" to check up on Twilight after her rather abrupt exit.
Looks like one of my observations/predictions is about to come to fruition.
Very good one!!!
3322393 I'm sorry you weren't satisfied with the way things turned out.
3322524 Rarity knows of Shining and Cadance, but they've barely had any screen time together since those two were introduced and I was looking for something to mention that Rarity only knew vaguely about Twilight. It was admittedly a bit of a stretch.
I tried to really focus on Spike's relationship with the Mane Six this time around because I've neglected it so often in the past.
And thanks for catching that error. That was a subtle one I wouldn't have noticed on my own.
3324469 Nothing against this story as its well written, I just don't care for lesbians period and hated to see Spike actually dump on himself in a story. Wish there were tags for Straight, Lesbian and Gay cause truth be told, I only read this story cause it was tagged with Spike and thought it might be a Sparity. At this point in his life Spike might as well saw his junk off with a rusty knife and tatoo on his face "i am a bitch, do to me whatever you want and I won't do shit about it'
3322524 Gotta love how everypony judges Spike ONLY based on the size of his body and nothing despite being like 5-7 years younger then Twilight. If they're gonna consider Spike a baby dragon til he actually grows to least pony size they Spike is gonna be a "baby dragon" for atleast 100-150 more years if not longer.
That was an interesting chapter though not as much conflict as I thought would be there Can't wait to see what happens to Twilight and Rarity after the checking up on her This will be one hell of a roller coaster of a ride at least for Twilight since this is the first time she had a crush at least in this story I WANT MOAR SOON! If that is alright with you
That went better than the shoot reveal. Guess it's proved better to be more open with your friends off the bat, Rarity! Though they may not have been this understanding if the first reveal hadn't happened in the way it did... Tough one.
Applejack's softened her stance on it, at least outwardly. Knowing its never going to have been a first choice for Rarity at any point and knowing a little about her situation as well as not flying off the handle helped this one play out much more calmly than previously, though I fully understand where she was coming from. Not sure she'd be that open to watching it, unless she's played her hoof really well.
Dash did and didn't surprise me. Blurting out that she not only knows who Rare was working for but has an intimate knowledge of their body of work strikes me as unguarded, even for Dash. Sounds like a sale of at least 1 unit!
Pinkie, party. Fluttershy, kind and considerate. Twi, drunken meltdown. Par for the course!
I'm glad Spike was involved with the party, even if the poor boy is confused as all Tartarus. Not sure it added too much right at this point, but with any luck he'll get an idea what goes into a movie eventually
Looking forward to the next chapter, and trust that Rarity and Twi can work out something between them that benefits both parties
One other small thing:
That sounded like an AJ line
*sniff* *sniff* sniff* I SMELL A SEX SCEAN!!!
Unless your Fluttershy and said library is a tree
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