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Sorry. I know it's actually early Tuesday morning where I am and I was pretty sure I'd said Monday, but here's Chapter 10 regardless. Hope you enjoy!
And now, the fun well and truly begins. ^_^
Poor Rarity, things didn't go so well in the end and now things are only going to get worse. I just want to hug her.
Still sad Spike decided to be a total bitch and immediately give up on Rarity and dedicate himself to helping Twilight get with her instead.
3285697 Where's it say that?
I kinda agree that it sucks that Spike isn't trying hard enough to get Rarity.
3285814 Canon says that. They are still at the black and white filmstrip stage in Ponyville. Commercial video is likely up to 50s tech. Give them some time to develop dutch angles and wide shots.
3286068 dude. Canon is so irrelevant to fanfic, especially one about porno videos.
3286149 Here, just take a swig of this.
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While I acknowledge modern porn is not shot this way, I have no wish to read about the actors pausing midthrust while the cameras are repositioned. Let's just assume the characters are doing things in a manner that makes sense to their world.
3286167 Nice to see you again, Steel. You don't have to defend my story tooth and nail if you don't want to, but I appreciate it all the same.
Damn producers!!!!!!!!!
Porn not being shot this way is interesting... At least most porn nowadays is less..Romantic. If AJ and the others aren't as supportive as she expects, I could totally see Rarity in some rougher vids. Though being a throating fan, I might not mind...
Oh, and thank you so much for not making the "emptying" part of the show. I'm greatly relieved that didn't happen.
3287334 To be honest I didn't even think I was going to write anal clop. The whole thing seems really gross to me. I decided that for the sake of filming a pornography it would have to be included, but it's probably not something I will write again for a while.
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Hmm. That kinda showed in the sceneāit felt more perfunctory than erotic, to be honest. I know Rarity wasn't too keen on the idea to begin with, but that's all the more reason to be liberal with the physical details, her reactions, etc. It's a new experience, so there's going to be a lot of new sensory input to work through.
That was a great chapter though it felt but it worked. I can't wait for her friends reactions I WANT MOAR If that is alright with you
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Honestly, I could tell, but I'm glad you did, for the benefit of the plot and both Rarity's audience and yours It may not be your cup of tea but what was there was handled pretty well. I agree with Silvernis, as it was her first time there was perhaps a bit more you could have explored, taken as much time exploring Rarity's reactions as the scene progressed as you did with the bondage chapter earlier in the story, but it's outside your comfort zone and I appreciate the time you did spend on the scene.
Shame about Rarity not getting the answer she wanted straight away, but that's not always how life or fics work, and anyway, the producers haven't said no yet
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You and me both! I was surprised the "filling" was featured and filmed, but why not show the same attention to detail as the film's handled Rarity's other firsts? I am a fan of anal, particularly in well-written fics but don't hold much affection for the emptying side...