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Not too sure how everyone's gonna feel about this one. I had something completely different planned for this chapter and then I came up with this. I guess we'll see what the reaction is.
Italian is best gently pony.
Pretty good chapter though in my opinion Rarity's anger disappears a little too quickly but I guess she's kinda desperate :P
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Its an...interesting development. A few chapters back it felt like she was slowly getting into the whole porn thingy, and that Twilight would end with a broken heart, also with sexual jealousy over Rarity. Now things dont seem so dark.
I would say Rarity should have also asked that everyone be discreet about about her employment so that she isn't so irrevocably associated with the porn industry. But on the other hand, if anyone were to learn that she was only filmed once and then opted to apply her design expertise to the films and nothing else, it might actually help her reputation rather than smear it further.
Honestly, I'm going to be honest.
I was surprised....no, floored, with the sudden 180 on this. You have went and made it from a possible "Rarity becoming a adult films star" to something that I'm pretty sure the majority of your readers (yes, myself included) did not even comprehend. Yes, Rarity becomes part of the adult industry, but as their costume designer?? Straight from left field with a curveball out of the zone. Why else would ponies need clothes anyway, unless its like lingerie?? And at the same time, she would be able to stay in Ponyville if she wanted--it's her business location, plus the possibility of privacy.
It looks too good to be true!!! And it also kinda implies that there may be some feelings between Italian and Rarity--just a little, mind you. I can see what you are doing there, potentially foreshadowing with the celebratory post-shooting party and dinner afterwards.
Still want to know how Spilight (not the ship for this) deals with it. At some point Rarity's gotta come clean.
3247401 Ehhhh...
This felt... rushed, actually. I think what 3247496 said is kinda true: Rarity's emotions subside too quickly. And, to be honest, Italian sounded a like a stereotypical boyfriend being broken up with.
Case in point.
On the other hand, I feel that this is a very important chapter in regards to Rarity's overarching feelings for Italian. She's definitely not happy that he doesn't reciprocate her feelings (romantically, anyway), but at the same time it seems that Rarity has an almost newly found respect for Italian because of his offer and apology. "She didn't want to betray too much forgiveness, after all."
I dunno about this one. You stave off what could have been a deliciously awkward problem—or at least, make it look like the problem has been staved off—which leaves me feeling vaguely cheated. It was too easy. While it's good that Rarity and
the stallion with the ridiculous nameItalian have kinda-sorta reached an understanding, the scene still feels a bit rushed and ham-fisted in its delivery.It's funny how porn is one of the biggest money making industries and yet most of it is illegal
I have to agree that Rares gets over it too fast. However, the big thing for me is that it seems too... Convenient. Really, a steady designer job? I expected at least some more pressure to get into more films, or at least her friends figuring out her problems BEFORE she got them in line...
3247401 as much as i like to say this but the Italian speaks a lot of hot air,him and HC say there big time producers but for who? play colt?? or are there others??? i dont get the feeling behind the words that they are big time producers, and there are no stats to back up there clam like how many movies they made, or how much gross they made per movie. there are no hard facts back there statements or if you didn't want to give them to begin with..thats how i feel about this story as of now
Suddenly there's a light at the end of the tunnel, and I can't really say that I mind.
Hmm...okay, after having read the comments over I'd like to say a few things.
1. Just because Rarity's potentially working as a costume designer now does not necessarily mean she won't become an adult star in the future.
2. 3247644 I guess my opinions about how a porno is filmed might not be correct (multiple scenes vs. one long, drawn out scene), but I went based on personal preference when I made that decision.
3247496 3247583 3247685 3247714 3247775 3247994 3248145 Like I said, I was unsure about how this chapter would come across and I probably should have went with my gut, but I'll continue the story as is and see what happens.
3250677 You never know. I figured out a way to get the plot back on track. It's a little stupid, to be honest, but not as stupid as screwing it up in the first place.
I really like the idea, by the way.
Amazing, love this story, can't wait to see Twilights reaction. Also can't wait for future story's or chapters that you make. Good job
I think I like how this chapter went I feel that it fitted Rarity's character as canon than getting stuck in the industry as an actress Though the potential of that happening and possible dragging Twilight into it is still there and it would be a very interesting idea but I would still like to see those two get together because it is a ship that I don't see has very much popularity I WANT MOAR SOON If that is alright with you.
3258869 I find it interesting. People dismiss it out of hand because it's spank material but a lot of our technology adoptions have related directly to it. VHS beat out Betamax because of porn (despite Beta being a better standard). The first book printed on the Gutenberg press was a Bible, but erotic literature made print popular.
I find the industry behind it fascinating.
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Personally, I think that that the supposed taboo with adult literature and publishing has a little to do with culture. When it all comes down to it, the process of intercourse (or coitus, banging, whatever you want to call it) is biological in origin. A species has to reproduce, and there have to be ways to initiate and cultivate the various methods and ideas that eventually lead to it, including seduction, courting, and attraction. Where the theological and psychological things about it is where things get...ahem, sticky That probably comes from puritanical times as far as the U.S. is concerned, where basically sexual attaction was a mortal sin and damned to hellfire. I think you could also inadvertantly thank WW I and II for it--why else would the baby boom happened? Not Certainly because ameobas split apart into two, obviously!!!
And not to sound sexist, but I think the rise of the adult industry is also thanks to women's lib--the burning bras thing. Women started seeing themselves as beautiful, attactive, and desirable beings, men obviously started seeing that as the same way, and now it's accepted and lauded to, for lack of a better term, "flaunt" their natural gifts for all of mankind to enjoy out in the open.
3274016 Of course it has to do with culture. Specifically and especially American culture. We're prudes.
We're a country founded by prudes and we revel in our prudishness. We're growing, but it's taking a while.
3274022 You have a good point there. We're perfectly okay with all kinds of violence, but the minute we see a bare breast it's immediately criticized. It's completely backwards.
Coming back after far too long away for various reasons I think I remembered a blog post or another comment somewhere about this chapter not turning out as everyone may have expected. Guess something triggered a worry in the back of my head. It was right...
Time and the next few chapters will tell how this plays out but this was a surprise. I reckon I would have been far more comfortable if it'd been the other way around: Rarity gets offered a steady job designing clothing for an enterprise she continues learning about once she's started the job, turns horrified but accepts her position, a starlet is indisposed or something and Rares steps into the breach...
The back and forth between Rarity and Italian wasn't as over-egged as it could have been despite following a well-worn script, it's a little convenient (as even the main character points out), and the acceptance condition was priceless: when you bugger me tomorrow, be gentle
Sceptically, I shall read on