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I hope Spike feels better and he gets it with someone soon.
Oooooooh, how cute this between AJ and Fluttershy. I love it!
3636466 There was a blog post or whatever stating that the main characters would all get happy endings by the end of the story, which means Spike is gonna be all alone. Only reason Spike was included in this story was to have him shit on himself.
Adorable!
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I think we both know how this is gonna go---Rarity and Twilight are marefriends with each other, Rainbow's not gonna hook up with anypony....yet, Pinkie's too---what's the word I'm looking for??---I guess, childish to even worry about potentially wishing for a special somepony, and even though Applejack and Fluttershy are both wanting to just stay as friends when one is needed, we are gonna see some AppleShy in the future, because there is just way too much in there for them to both deny that there isn't something there.
Which means that Spike's gonna end up alone---probably in the next chapter where both Rarity and Twilight admit to Spike in full about his crush and how "immature" it is, and how adult and real that Twilight and Rarity feel for each other, and in addition, the standard "I like you as a friend, only a friend, but you're too young for me line" Rarity will utterly say to Spike, and also that Spike's too young to engage in adult issues. I'm almost calling for them to try to get him to see one of the Crusaders to see him as a crush (Once again, calling Spike a kid to his face in so many words ). It almost wants me to post the image of Twilight smash her hoof in a computer with an adamant "NO." show up, but that the right of the author, and even though I'm not a huge supporter of RariLight, I do enjoy well-written literature. It's just what I have to expect.
I'm also calling that when Rarity recieves her "film" in the mail, she will either invite Twilight over to a "mares only" showing of the film, leaving Spike at home, or meet Twilight at the library, use the Soundproof Spell over Twilight's bedroom, and they have it there.
One of the chapters has to be all-out smut though--what better way for Twilight to truly show Rarity exactly how she feels about the fashionista than let Rarity show her some of the things that she acted on the film, and then have a hands-on approach? Cue a futa spell.
The clop was delicious, the story was gorgeous, and the romance is adorable. Only question is I seem to have missed what happened to Rarity. Is she just... sitting at home, explaining to Sweetie Belle about 'the hydra and the parasprites'?
3636657>>3636693 You two are probably right but I'll stick it out for now. But if Spike doesn't end up with somepony female well...encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcR8iUYtiCR4iEFP_cantKKoDxVQJv2pgVcuXsSMLgeXwTa90q40sw
Hum... FlutterApples.
3636693 I called all of that several chapters ago. Spike was only ever included in this story to first shit on himself by not only giving up on Rarity but dedicating himself to helping Twilight get with her, but by the end to have Twilight and Rarity shit on him as well.
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The meat of the story is done.....however, there is still time for a twist or two...
3636476 Oh yeah. HER. I actually have an OC based loosely on her named Quick Quotes Quill. But she's not really horrible. But a lot ponies percieve her as such.(or they will, when I actually write a fic about her.)
3638292 Just don't understand why so many peple hate Spike so much.
3636693 3637814 Let's not jump to conclusions. Nothing concerning Spike is certain until the story's end, and I assure you these negative outcomes for him are not what I have in mind.
3639388 Just don't really like how much of a pussy bitch Spike is right now. Even if he found somepony else to be with as soon as someone would show the slightest interest in the pony/whatever he wanted to be with he'd do the exact same thing he did when he found out about Twilight's feelings for Rarity.
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Like I said before to my compardre:
.....meaning that majority has been resolved, but the story is NOT over!! I don't know about him, but I'm still pumped to find out what happens next! We still have to view the aftermath of Rarity's porn film with Italian.
.......why do I get the feeling that Rainbow Dash will know exactly who Italian is, and the reason is because she has an EXTENSIVE porn collection that would put Hoof Heffer to shame??!
Yay.
This chapter was all of the warm fuzzies for me to read. Infrequently at best have I encountered good AppleShy shipping, and I'm curious to see where this example goes. Also a random thought that occurred to me...
Given that we know Dashie isn't into mares (or at least claims such these days), that still leaves her one option...
(One could point out that is also a candidate, as are any number of other fellows, but Big Red hasn't particularly played much of a part here compared to Spike; Chekhov's Gun and all.)
That was Awesome I have high hopes for that couple but I want to know more about Rarity and Twilight. But of course I have two more chapters to read then I will have a critique.