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Lizzy_The_Dwarf
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pretty good I will stick around for the next chapter.
good job so far and if you need a proofreader ill help you
did you saw spike in the imagen?
3021895 oh god no, poor spike.
Okay. The picture shows humanized umamimis. If the ponies look like that then they are humanized, and not anthro, and the anthro tag should not be used. If they look like the picture from this story then they are anthro, and you should use a different picture.
So which is it?
3024248well I was looking for a pic to use and this was one of the only one I found that we pg if you will. If you have a pic you think would be better then please give me a link. Thank you for informing me.
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I get that. Though if I couldn't find any relevant picture I wouldn't have used one at all.
Did you take a look at the cover image for the story that I left a link to in my first comment? That picture is the good pg example of anthro ponies. That picture can also be found on deviantart.
3025933i didn't see that you left a link I'm sorry. and also i did state that i was a new writer and the definitions on the FQA told me 'human' involved humans and 'anthro' involved human looking ponies. I'm sorry if i mix up the term. also eric is dying in the first scene so it understandable if he misses a few details and in the hospital scene thing are happening quite quick. take in mind i try to write as if I'm in that situation and so in later chapters there will be more detail just not right now. thank you again.
Dude you need to place a (celestia) / (dr who) when you go first person so whe known who are the one it is aboute
3062301thank you for informing me i will try to remember to do that in the next chapter.
3062401
The tittle should be called The Doctor Is In. Kind of a joke or pun, but i have to ask why Doctor Hooves in your story ?.
3063407well I put him in as more of a last minute thing because I write whenever my muse hits me with inspiration and that is what came out.
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cool i know how hard it is to write when you have writers block i have a story too but i'm kinda stuck could you give it a read and give me some feedback 
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perfect simply perfect
To hell with you celestia!!!
cool cool
(please please not an harem story not an harem story
)
3159170 oh don't worry i have no plan on making a harem.
one mare at most. so don't worry my friend.
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Oh im definetly waiting for next chapter
Luna
Pinkie Pie
Twilight
Realy great story
cant wait for next page 
more
need more
3310444more will come my friend. More will come.
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The story is good so far but sometimes you don't write in the correct tense. If you don't have a editor or proof reader I suggest getting one. The story is turning out to be good so far and I did enjoy the talk with pinkie.
3457098well thank you for the complement and sorry about the tense i am working on it because i don't what a proof reader because i want to see want i can do by myself. and i wasn't planning to get this done until this weekend and when i finished i was so excited that i didn't read over it again looking for all my mistakes and after reading it again i found quite a few and will be re-uploading tomorrow.
3458048 Thats good. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Now thats what i call a good story
Keep up good work with 4th wall... oh and story too 
3020592 I am only going to start reading this right now because of your picture fanficlover128.
And I’m Eric. So, is it safe for me to assume, you two are friend
did you mean friends?
Much better grammar than your previous chapters. Kudos!
3693128 Danke sehr mr.ninja
3693128 sir, do you still think I need a editor or proofreader?
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This is much better, I did catch a few words that were not conjugated correctly like friend instead of friends. But overall these minor mistakes do not harm comprehension of your work. As such I think it is entirely up to you. I am too much of a perfectionist to not have editor; but if you are fine with how this turned out no need to change.
Is this story dead? It hasn't updated in over a year.
5422536 Yes and no; it's in a coma like state because I haven't been able to work on it while I'm in school and seeing as I attend school year round in an accelerated program I don't know when the next chapter will be done. Also the person that I started writing this for no longer want to see anymore, so I don't have the motivation like I used too. So no it not dead, but I can't work on it right now. I'm just not good enough to manage school, writing, video making, and still keep myself sane, but I'm working as hard as I can to get the next chapter done.
5428135 I understand, thank you for taking the time to explain it and I hope that one day you might return to this story because it's quite good.
5428445 Thank you and I hope so too.
I hope you can update this story soon
6396069 I would love to spend all my time on this story and the seven other story ideas I have, but school is just taking so much time. Especial now that I'm working on my own programming language for capstone (which is a thesis like project for my school). It's slowly driving me insane.
You should try listening to some comedy to get rid of some of the insanity
6396535 Hopefully after my capstone I will have more time to write for this store and start a few others.
With story's like this I see great things in your future