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*wipes happy tear from face*
Bravo. Just... Wow. You can do both dark and SoL really well
I was thinking about giving up on this, but this chapter convinced me otherwise.

Not... a bad chapter, I liked it... kind of an alternate universe of peace for the changelings...

Wonderfully done for a slice of life chapter also...

*Realization moment in 5 - 4 - 3 - 2 - 1* Did I actually forget to like this? *sonbitch cookie eaten*

Oh my, an ending that doesn't shoot me right in the heart...

How refreshing

Good chapter, nice to see things actually work out in the end

and I wish I had a copy of Immortal Lovers...

yes...yes...yes the suspense was killing me about when you would finish this chapter

WOO!!! Celly's chronicle is OUT!!! I'd give you a spike stache, but I only know one emoticon.

That just made my day a little better, it wasn't a bad day but this bumped it up to good

I got quite a few feels from this because it was something I could actually relate to.
You sir, have proudly made me shed a tear. Carry on.

WOOT!! Great story

But he is only mortal, wouldn't he die eventually? either way i really enjoyed it and I cant wait for the next one.

FINALLY! Although, god damn it, AJ! Why do you have to be so racist? Bad pony! Also, I don't know what this says about me, but for some reason, I liked bat shit crazy Luna better. I don't know why.

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Fantastic

T-T you made my day I thanks you I really do, Celly is my all time fave pony (well there Nightmare and Cadance but sun-butt is #1!!!)

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epic dude a lot more real love and loss of faith in ones true love while the other well was a Slender man romance

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FUUUUUUUU......
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That was awesome fantastic story as always can't wait for the next one.

Hmm... I like the change from bat shit crazy sexy Luna to a to nice, cute, cuddle-worthy Celestia. And I'm not feelin the name tobias; maybe its cause I have a deep hatred for any fictional character with t.o.b.i. in their name.

fucking great, this is the stuff that gives delta hard-ons

one queshein thou what is with the racist AJ man

I have no words... for how great this was This has to be one of the greatest romance stories I have ever read also the peace between the changelings

*phew*(took about an hour to finish.) I'm glad that this story was longer. it had more detail and emotions.(can you do a follow up where we see what Celestia did to make up for her selfishness? I'm dying to know!) How often will it be the Princess's fault that causes the break ups?

I feel all warm and toasty from this (curious as to why Applejack acted the way she was? Is it because she's a redneck?)

So who's turn is it next to get a break up?

I HATE YOU SO MUCH I WANT TO HAVE A ALICORN LOSE THE RELATIONSHIP ALREADY SOMEHOW!

I am deeply impressed, even if the changeling thing came out of the left field.

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Remember the link…Celestia has to be absolute sure to give her life for another so she never did it with her first stallion, but she want him, and he pass the test, he won the link, and for that gain immortality.

Men I LOVED IT THAT is how that Link should work, with not some crazy alicorn instinct thing, but with real emotions and dealing thing the right way, and you sir, just make a master piece, really THIS is pure gold no, better than gold this is pure platinum, I really hope you could make more, more balance and well though stories like this one, because I loved it.

Please keep it up, I can't wait to see your next story

DAYUM!!!!!!!
IS EVERYTHING YOU WRITE MADE OF PURE AWESOME!?!?!

God damn it! y u so good at writing?! Gah! It's like a friggin drug I can't get enough of!!!!!
Not that I do drugs, just makin an analogy.
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Stop looking at me like that!

In all seriousness though, great friggin chapter! I like this kind of Celestia, so adorable

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Nope, remember this?

"Celly," I soothed gently. "I…I still love you so much. I don't think I could ever take this much time apart from you again."

Her expression rapidly became joyous, desperate and yet…determined.

"Then don't," she breathed lovingly. "I want to be with you forever Toby. I want to have a family and get married…and make you mine for the rest of my life."

Her life…not mine?

"Oh…of course"

I reached up and gently took her face in my hands, causing her to smile tenderly and kiss me affectionately.

"I might not be the one Celly," I stated quietly. "I don't want you to do this without knowing for certain that you want me."

"Do you want me?" she asked, tilting her head to the side cutely.

"More than you will ever know," I replied huskily.

Her muzzle quickly adorned a full blown grin as she nuzzled my face ever so happily.

"Then of course you're the one. I want you to be with me forever and ever."

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Remember that good ol' cliche where AJ would lasso the Human the moment she saw them?

I was taking the piss out of it

No real hate for AJ

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That gif is so cute it should be illegal

These chapters are gun tie up or be related in some way right?

... Wow... Do not stop writing, or I shall hunt you down and brony you into a puddle of pony

SWEET CELESTIA IT HAS BEEN UPDATED *Dies*

Amazing that is all I can say.

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Nope

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Just to show my love for this chapter (story, but mostly this chapter) all of the characters (as in; spaces, letters, numbers) have been individually typed at least once. So the sound I made while making the above paragraph would be *taptaptaptaptaptaptaptaptap* with no holding of keys.

Please make the next one very dark please

Much happier than the last chapter.

That was beautiful ~
a long wait fit the update but wow totally worth it.

cheers to the next chapter mate

WARNING! WARNING! DAWW LEVELS AT CRITICAL! HEART COLLAPSE IMMINANT!

But, really, this is a nice change of pace from the Luna that was, well...

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Let's say, Overly Attached...

*stands up begins clapping*
Yes, just Yes.

great chapter... but i kinda like the dark ones better

Do Twilight next please.
Also really good chapter. Sharp contrast from Luna's chapter.

im still sayin chrysallis should have a role in immortal lovers

Good, good......now......now you shall continue to write and update this material or you shall dye......your hair pink HA PLAY ON WORDS!

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I Will Ball My Goddamn Eyes Out If Alex Breaks It Off With Cadence

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Say, Zam, do you consider Philomena royalty? If so, try and do something similar to (Re)Birth Through Fire.