OH HELL YES!

Fuck yes!

i think NMM scares me the most with that cover art

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Then my work here is done ;)

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i would have used different pics for Luna and Twi but meh, its still good

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It was the big mans decision on which pics I should use.

Well I guess I better read this now, but this is going to have to work AWFULLY hard to beat the current high scorer of "Diary of a Madman".

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im not complaining.....im just a bit picky with my images....i like high quality, god tier artwork, and i have alot....to the point where i dont remember when or where i got half of the stuff i have . but like i said, its still good

oh my god yes yes YES...ahahahahahahahah!!!! that is all
round six hahahaha

Another episode of "Loving Rape Time" how wonderfull...

I have to wonder thought, why didn't he seek out something that can kills gods, since Luna seemed to allude to such a thing existing?

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He was angry, not murderous

MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

I don't know if I feel sorry for Steven or not? he gets to bang Luna everyday, but he has no free will... lucky bastard.

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Hauntingly beautiful. Nothing more needs to be said about this story.
And now I will patiently await the next bit of madness you can come up with for this story. I can imagine what the Gryphon Queen will do to her human lover. Trow him into the dungeon, and subject him to a special kind of 'torture', with her as the torturer, until he becomes addicted to her.

Good luck with all of your endeavors.

Next member of Royalty?

CADENCE!

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Damn.
Bitches be crazy.

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That was as incredible as it was horrifying. Now then I do believe I hear Luna calling....

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3008782 I didn't mean to kill Luna...I meant as a way out.

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Another episode of "Loving Rape Time" how wonderfull...

This is actually about only the second most fucked up relationship involving magic that I've read about.

I have to wonder thought, why didn't he seek out something that can kills gods, since Luna seemed to allude to such a thing existing?

Because he's mad at Luna for not consulting him on the whole "Immortality" issue, not murderously furious at her. Also more relevantly, he's neither some kind of magical superhero like a Solar Exalt or something, nor possessed of any useful abilities or traits like magical immunity, ala Alexander from the Stoneverse. I mean sure, he got boosted strength and endurance, and a lessened need for food and drink. Plus magical time telling powers and some kind of animal empathy style ability. None of these powers are particularly useful in a direct confrontation with Luna, particularly since she gave them to him in the first place, and might very well be able to temporarily suppress said powers if she needed to.

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This is why you always take a charm that perfectly defends against Unnatural Mental Influence.

Moar! Nuff said

Hmm...

Evil Celestia (Nightmare Queen possessed?) would be good - then again, a Fallen Cadence (non-Nightmare Queen) would also be cool.

Celestia! Say, 1000 years ago before, during, and after Luna's downfall? The human meets her before, they start getting together before, things intensify during, he may break up with her either near the tail end of her downfall or after it. At least, that's how I would do it if I had any decent writing skills.

wow... I'm not sure how I feel about this. It's like looking at the highest form of psychological manipulation I've ever seen. I'm both intrigued and scared of this kind of process.

INSIGNIFICANT WORD CREATURE OF BLOOD AND FLESH! I DEMAND MOAR!

I vote for Chrysalis next!

That's...
darker than I expected.

AWWWWW YEAH! Can't wait for more!!

That cover art alone is just....Damn
And the first chapter is with Luna, I feel sorry for Steve (more so since we share the same name )
Edit: Do either Twi or Nightmare next, THAT would be fun to read.

Wow. Just...wow. Reading the summary, I wasn't too sure what I was going to be entering into. But what you wrote completely beat out my expectations from what a story like this usually involves.

EDIT: On the bright side, Steven won't have to mentally contend with his immortality any longer. My vote goes to Twilight next. Considering your previous works, I believe the newest princess hasn't been written about very much.

I vote Griffons next! Seeing a breakup with a clawed predator should be all 41 flavors of fun.

who's the Princess in the the top right corner, it's not cadence is it?

3009357 Nnope, that's creepy Mc Sparkles right there

I vote twilicorn.

Awesome

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ooo that make sense it's Luna,Twi,Cadence,Celestia, and NMM. i wonder if he'll add Nightmarity just for fun

I scroll down to read the title of the first chapter and when i see it involving Luna i emmediatly start thinking

'Dude, your so screwed.'

then i start thinking

'What would Sun Butt do if someone broke up her? Would it be devistating? Will she banish 'im to the sun?'

The thing that scares me the most as a human is not being eaten like any other animal. No, my greatest fear is losing my free will. To lose it, is to lose your humanity. All Steven is now is a meat puppet. Hell, I would have found the highest fucking cliff and jumped off it. Nevertheless, that was pretty fucking good and I want to see what the newly minted Twilicorn would do.

Twilight. It just has to be.

is it bad that the ending doesn't sound that bad to me?

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or one of those chapters where its so dangerously awesome that its like death race and crank 2 had a baby and raised it with sparkle juice.
yes that kind of sparkle juice

That was... Weird..? But I'm pretty certain it was a good weird! :)

3009483 same for me. losing an integral part of yourself, no, your reason for existence, is not like losing an arm or a leg. yes, losing one of those might be traumatizing, but you can get over it, but losing your free will? that is the stuff that nightmares are scared of, and for me, just thinking about it nearly breaks my mind. if you have the choice to live and lose your free will, or die with it intact, knowing that you made the choice to die out of your own free will, it will be hard, but i would choose death.

3009483 agreed I would have found some rope hang my self then to have my free will taken from me.also I would like to see how luna would have dealnif he killed himself.

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You all know what to do if you want more :)
SHOUT!!!

FUS...RO DAH!

Wait, if she can bent his will, those that mean that HE can bent her will as well? I just saying I wonder what would happen if it is the human that get all psico and possessive

Caqn we have an Chrysalis story?

Oh I have a request, but is an insane one. How Eris will deal with a breakout?