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Over the course of a few weeks, a string of seemingly unrelated murders have propped up and the only dick that’s capable enough to to tackle this job is a dick.

Unfortunately for hardboiled private eye Richard King, he and professional party planner Pinkie Pie must put aside their differences and work together to solve the death of a producer and a pegasus.

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You're welcome! And it sounds like derpy was responsible for a death....

Nice story please continue

3009652 Or someone disguised as Derpy! Dun dun duuuuuuun! :rainbowderp: uhm, no spoilers.

3014294 it was just a guess, since it was the same stuff she dropped on twi...

3014478 Well, yeah. But remember, the main antagonist in the movie, know one new that Judge Doom was a Toon. It was only until the last few scenes of the movie did he reveal himself to be a Toon. I.e. he took off a disguise.

3014478 Well, yeah. But remember, the main antagonist in the movie, know one new that Judge Doom was a Toon. It was only until the last few scenes of the movie did he reveal himself to be a Toon. I.e. he took off a disguise.

Yes, my avatar is the logo for Disney's Fort Wilderness Resort and Campground. But I hope to have a good pony OC soon.

If I started another story after the one I'm currently writing, I would love to have the opener be like the one from Borderlands 2 "So you want to here another story, eh? One where the very fate of Equestria hangs in the balance? If not, too bad - I'm telling you anyway." :rainbowlaugh:

Smashed by a random assortment of objects from the sky? Now who does that remind me of?:derpytongue2:

Who Framed Roger Rabbit is one of my favorite movies!:pinkiehappy:

Is this story cancelled? It's a shame if it is, I really like it.:fluttershysad:

4782138 No. I've just been busy. Really busy. Like Junior and Senior year of High School busy.

4911021 Wow, yeah I understand. I totally get it. I'm going through school right now too and I haven't updated my fic in a while either.

Reports of this Fanfiction's cancellation has been greatly exaggerated. I have set myself to work to finishing this work and I am currently working on the 4th chapter. I wish I could have finished this sooner, but that's high school for ya.

4912130 I just hope I'll have this finished before I graduate. I need to get this to start picking up friction again.

The chapter is practically done. I just need to review one thing and then I'm golden.

4912130 I uploaded the 4th chapter :scootangel:

huh, good to see this update, So far it seems to transition well enough and keeps some of the elements from the film, I have to say the whole Iphone thing, with some knowledge on private instigators let me tell you using and iPhone is a bit unprofessional usually they spend money on quality recorders, but then again he's a but of the low on cash type, Changing it to a regular recorder may make it a little better, but hey its up to you, and to be fair its not really big of an issue, all in all keep up the good work.

4920736 Thanks for your input and I'm glad to see people happy that I finally updated this after about a year (I blame junior year of high school). I do plan on editing the story when I've completed it and I can use a computer instead of my iPad, or least some thing with a keyboard.

Here's something to tide you guys over until I post the next chapter
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The transition from the last chapter to this one worked surprisingly well, even though it was posted over a year earlier. Usually stories that haven't been updated in a while have an "off " feeling in newer chapters, but you did very well in keeping with the same spirit of earlier on . Great job:pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Fireing bow deleted Sep 1st, 2014

4930427 I didn't know that that was a thing most authors had who don't update in a while, but good thing I stress it upon myself to read previous chapters so I know how to ease into another. :twilightsheepish:

If you pardon me Man. How long do you hold up soon?:twilightsheepish: I was going to create my version of Who Framed Roger Rabbit called Who Framed Demi Lovato with Pinkie Pie in the role of Eddie Valiant with Demi Lovato in the role of Roger Rabbit set in 2021. :twilightsheepish:

4943493 what do you mean by "Hold up soon" ? I plan on finishing this before I graduate high school in May.

For those who are wondering, High School is why I haven't posted anything in a while.
1. I'm behind on school work
2. I need to retake some quizzes
3. The term doesn't end until Wednesday next week
So if you want to know when I will be writing and posting again, it won't be until the ending of next week.

1. High School, behind on some work
2. My iPad is very inconvenient for me to type stories on
3. Trying to fill out collage scholarship applications
4. Studying for the ACT
5. Allergies and running a fever
Yes, I haven't forgotten the story or anything like that, but stuff has gotten in the way of me to actually do anything. I need to go back and look at my draft for the next chapter, on Tuesdays and Thursdays I have an extra class called Advisery which has computers I can use to write and post… when I'm not getting work done and keeping my grade up.

I've been reading the book Who Censored Roger Rabbit, the book that the movie Who Framed Roger Rabbit is based on, and I think I may edit chapter 2 and 3 so it will closely reflect the book. I have been thinking long and hard about my own creative contribution to the plot of the story and plan on adding those elements in too. In other words, I any free time I have that I can devote to this story will consist of me editing and re-editing it before I can write anything new.

- Fireing Bow
March 3rd, 2015

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