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Congrats! You have given me more to read... Oh, and welcome to the club! I'm Noakwolf, if you plan to go anywhere with this than join the FoE fic group!
Oh wow... I can't read this, Oh wow... This is the second time this has happened, it looked so promising and you killed it. Why! I mean really a human? Really? Thats not even funny to joke about, you presented it so well, I swear. Please tell me why? The plot you have is really good. I really like it, but really a human? I have no comment on that in any shape form or way.
Also, are you from the UK? Some of the words you used are British words like amour because the way I and other Americans spell it is armor But it's good either way, I just wanted to throw that out there. But my god why! A human, no no no no no! You lured me in and with that one sentence you lost it! You lost it all! You can keep the like because despite that it is well written, so congrats.
-Noakwolf
237533 I would recommend that you continue reading regardless of this little fact. You may be pleasantly surprised. And he is still a pony, who believes he is a pony since "humans" don't exist, let's call him a super mutant, almost like the NightCrawler to our X-men, a tailed, differently shaped/coloured freak caused by mutations at a genetic level in the womb. There is no "human" in equestria, merely a pony who can easily be described as human for his physical mutations. The narrator of the Introduction is a human reading it out so that reference is from a human perspective, where as the story itself is being told from Sunny's eyes, the eyes of a pony.
hopefully you can still read it.
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Thank you! I almost hit someone, you have earned my attention again. That is such a relief I'm so happy you cleared that up for me.
237577 No problem I figured that may have caused some confusion, Sunny Smiles is a pony who looks human due to a mutation, there is no "human being" in Equestria throughout :D
OMG more Fallout pony stuff to read and OMG my name!
Man I got to read this tonight when I get the chance.
258978 what did ya think
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I thought it was good actually! Dispite that little thing that you cleared up I enjoyed this very much!
280022 thank you
this got me a lot of hate over at the pony chat I go to and I have no idea why, they were attacking the writing itself but I couldn't find any mistakes...nothing major at least.
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