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When a stallion who spent a three year stay within the Everfree forest at the request of Princess Celestia returns to Ponyville the mane 6 find themselves forced into facing a foe none of them are prepared to handle. The Elements of Harmony may not be all they need to survive, if their friendship can last the journey into the heart...of the Everfree Forest.

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i do believe it's about to go down! can't wait to see what happened next.

I seriously can't wait for the next chapter!:pinkiegasp:

Nice cliffhanger. At the same time, you could end the story here. You've introduced characters, developed conflict, and (in most cases) resolved it. The only conflict I still see unresolved is between Twilight and the newcomer.

Speaking of the newcomer, I love his devil-may-care demeanor. A talent like his seems very versatile, but it also requires (in my mind) a great deal of planning. Good work so far.

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