Fluttershy... in a bar?

by FinnPony

Epilogue

"Where's that darn brother of mine!?" Applejack mumbled to herself while watching towards their home road. She was so angry at him that she had been waiting for Big Macintosh to return from the town for about four hours. She was dead-beat. When Big Mac didn't show up to make evening chores with her, she had to make them all by herself. Now she was sitting on their house's porch, sipping apple family's home made whiskey. It was not like him, to forget his job at the farm, had something happened to him?

Just then Applejack saw familiar pony pacing towards their house. It was Big Macintosh. Applejack stood up and went to meet him. "You darn little piece of..." she shouted but calmed down a little. "Ah had to make all the jobs while ya were... well somewhere! Where have ya been mister!?"
Big Mac didn't slow down when he answered: "In a bar."
Applejack's eyes widened and she said: "In a bar!? Ya were in a bar while Ah had to make all yar jobs here!?"
"Eeyep," Replied Big Mac.
"Well Ah hope you had good time. Because when Ah am done with ya, ya gonna hope ya were never born!" Applejack said face red from anger.
"Ah had," Big Mac said.
"What?"
"Ah had good time," Big Mac said again.
Applejack saw how he smiled a bit while saying it. It was not a wicked smile, it was a happy smile. The kind that comes when you think of something really wonderful. Now a bit more curious than angry, Applejack asked: "With whom ya were there, anyways?"
Big Macintosh didn't answer. That annoyed Applejack and she said, with more stronger voice this time: "Big Macintosh Apple, tell me now!"
Big Mac looked at her and said: "Nope."
Then it struck Applejack. Big Macintosh usually would not act like this, unless...
"Big Mac, were ya out with a mare?" she asked with a sheepish grin on her face. She saw how Big Mac blushed and she knew. She started jumping around Mac, who was seemingly embarrassed. "Who is she? Tell me! Tell me! Tell me!" Applejack demanded. She received a short reply: "Nope"
"Oh come on!"
"Nope."

They were now on the doorsteps of apple family's house. Big Macintosh kept on walking towards the door when he heard Applejack saying: "Fine, Ah will find out sooner or later, you can't keep your secret forever ya know!"

Big Mac rolled his eyes as he went inside, leaving Applejack alone on the porch. She was angry at him, but happy for him at the same time. She saw half empty whiskey bottle on the doorsteps. She lifted it up and took long sip straight from the bottle, determined to find out who was dating Big Mac.

Author's Note:

THE END. That was my first ever Fimfiction. Thank you all for reading it, hope you liked it.

I think that the next story is going to tell about Applejack trying to find out who is Big Mac dating.

Comments

[ron]

Oh my god I can't even handle the power....

This shit is just so real I can't even get down with it.

Extreme.

[Cash Flow]

Make it and fast I can't wait to keep reading pretty much anything that u make you are a pretty good author man congrats.

[FinnPony]

Thank you all for your help and feedback! I will start writing next story as soon as I get the storyline sorted out.

[peep]

I think you mean "Epilogue". A prologue is before the main story line, the epilogue is after.

Can't wait for sequel!

[BobtheLurker]

That was very good and a nice set up for the future. I'll be following.

[firehazard4303]

Hey that's cool. I'm writing a fimfiction about how Rarity gets drunk.

This story gives a rate of 5 moustaches.

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It's trollestia.

[Pen Brush]

How is this a chessgame story?

[musicman722]

2867202 I'm wondering the same

[Pen Brush]

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good, because I was really really confused

[musicman722]

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Must've been a troller. Sorry author

[FinnPony]

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WTF just happened?

[Weeeman]

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... You don't want to know

[Pen Brush]

2869435
some guy named lunaisthebestie or something put your story into the chessgame of the gods group on purpose. he was trolling us

[FinnPony]

2869869

Ok thanks! Panicked for a second there.

[Corona Blaze]

2870729 I, myself was wondering how this fit into the Chessverse's plotline but, that aside, it's a really good story. nice read.

[AppleJack_123]

Why cant u make more!!!

[FinnPony]

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This story was mainly a test, but I'm thinking of sequel after the mane six shippings are ready.

[blackpinkprincess]

Why did it have to end

[Lucky424]

And now onto the sequel...

MMM!!!

Shush... stupid pegasus, nopony can hear your screams.

[Mlp_BladeDancer]

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[AverageBrony]

This was really good. I can't find the words to describe it, but it was fantastic.

[GlitchHop]

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[DarthWill3]

Oh, Applejack...

[FinnPony]

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Glad you liked it!

[DarthWill3]

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You're welcome!
Can't wait for the sequel!

[FinnPony]

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Thanks

[FinnPony]

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Yeah. They are just made for each other.

[FinnPony]

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Oh I will... I have everything planned already...

[DUBMAR3000]

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great great great i love it

[FinnPony]

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Hey glad you liked it. Also thanks for pointing that out.

[SpikE-dog]

This is very good. It's sweet and short (er) and I lived it 5 stars all around.

[Akataja]

I just read the hole thing and I loved it till the very end, really good work.

[KingSombraTheTyrantRuler]

This is wonderful. Its staying on my favourites shelf to be safe.