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A mysterious young unicorn runs away into the forest outside Fillydelphia where he meets a pegasus with an astounding voice, can she convince him to open up his heart and discover what he's running away from?

(Please note, this is my first MLP fanfic and the first one of any kind that I've managed to finish.)

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 2 )

That was not a bad start; not a bad start at all. There are maybe one or two grammar errors I can see (which aren't even worth pointing out) and the story moves along quickly. I'm excited to see how this will tie in with the Mane Six.

It's a mediocre start. I don't see why it's been rating bombed, but I'll favorite to read for later.

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