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MrEnter


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After Rainbow Dash wins another flying competition, she attracts the attention of a famous director who immediately notices her resemblance to the character Daring Do. It's been his dream to make Equestria's first Daring Do movie and she will allow him to live that dream, or so he says. When things go awry and the traps seem more realistic than necessary how will she get out of this one?

Be careful for spoilers in the comments.

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Comments ( 19 )

Edit: SPOILERS

Good story.

Other than Rainbow being drunk, and the death of Alfred Hitchcolt's brother and near murder of Rainbow Dash, it seems like it would be an episode of the show itself!

2698770 Well that just spoiled the story for me. :facehoof:

I agree entirely with the guy below me.

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You should really read the story before you read the comments.

Too bad there is no spoiler tag here.

Sorry about that!

2699036
Wait, no. Damnit, I was agreeing with your comment.
The other guy must have got in first. :twilightblush:
My bad.

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That's okay. Judging by the time differences, you read the story before reading the comments! :rainbowlaugh: (sorry if pony emote whatev does not appear, mobile device, see no buttons to get easy pony placement...)

That has to be something! I don't know the word but that word isn't irony, that's all I know!

Meh. Could've been better, could've been much worse. :unsuresweetie: Giving it a like, but not a favorite. Good job on it, though, I'm not hating on it or anything.

2699036 Big screen :l and I'm a quick reader. I glanced at your comment for a second and was spoiled.

That was pretty good, I like the way that you have another force (the cider) make Dash go along with this. Instead of just inflating her ego so she dosen't care if she gets hurt or not, as long as she's famous.

john, that story was tenouddaten (see what i did there:twilightsheepish:) The story definetly kept me interested. Mind reviewing my story? It'd be awesome for a review. It'd be nice to review something other than spongebob, wouldn't it?:moustache:

If guys that want to wash away the shame of sexual scenes use cold showers, what do guys that want to wash away the shame of sadistic scenes use?

Awesome story:twilightsmile::pinkiehappy::yay:

3816235 , Eh, I guess that'll do.

I really liked this! (Not as good as Clean Up on Smile 5, but it will do) It was a little rushed, but still pretty good!

Cool idea, solid execution. A bit rushed, but still pretty cool. 4 stars

This story wasn't as good as I was expecting it to be.

And you know what?

That's what makes it better. It means, to me at least, that even people like Mr Enter can get things wrong, can make their own share of mistakes and errors. I had this idea he was a super great writer, but no he's an ordinary guy who just writes good fanfiction, not looking for perfection in a sense that it makes him look oh-so-talented, but rather in a sense that it's perfect if people who read it like it, and if he likes what he has written. I was actually intimidated by Mr Enter on this site because I'm a struggling writer who has had only a few successful stories, but when I saw the rushed effort of this story, I realized he wasn't a writer looking for perfection, but just to tell a story as best he can. So that puts me at ease.

I'm sorry if this sounded ridiculius and it probably did. I'm not very good at explaining myself out. But I'm not being rude or insulting towards Mr Enter. I greatly respect his work on YouTube. Also, glad to hear you cleared up the problems with Viacom, dude. Greedy bastards will pay for their crimes now!

Hold on. Does this take place before or after Magical Mystery Cure? If it takes place afterwards, then shouldn't Alfred be arrested for attempted assult on royalty? And wouldn't the police get the same punishment?

Oh mah God, I'm nagging too much!

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