Scootaloo Part 2 = FINISHED! Enjoy guys :D I worked a long time on this!

Short and sweet. Just how I like my fics.

awsome ending.

Apparantly, summer does not exist in Equestria.

>>Camokkid I'm afraid I don't know what you mean...the stories time period takes place with summer shifting into autumn.

EDIT: ok I see the error now....I derped

is that it?

>>bookcoda unfortunately yes. I'm afraid if I write anymore I will eventually run out of ideas and it will just completely butcher the story. Don't worry though, I got more stories on the way for you guys

Not bad, wish it could have been longer though.

>>Deathsia i personally dont like fics that are really long, so i try not to write long ones too much...although i will try to lengthen my next one out a little lol...and its alright if you wanted to see more action in there this is only my first story, you know

580253 I enjoyed the entire story. You did a great job.

Okay, this one was fan-fucking-tastic. I could feel the love between these two protagonists. One problem, I don't understand why he fell asleep at the beginning of the day. Did he not have his coffee?

>>BlackWidower I really appreciate all your feedback! And I actually did some of those things on purpose, the "not feeling the passion". You are actually the only one to catch that, and I congratulate you! Also, I completely agree with you on Chapter 6...it is just the best i've wrote overall (not trying to sound lime Trixie or anything ) and I will take a few things you said into consideration (continuity, the amount of time it takes to get hard (i lol'd) etc). Again, thank you !

I finishedit finally and all I have to say is that it was great!

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Maybe, but the thing's not spring-loaded.

>> cshadd Well you fav'd it so you must have enjoyed it!

I think I know how they Gonna Get they Cuite Marks

Well played Avastyourmagic well played.

580253 SEQUELS!!!!!!!!

>> CommanderRezurection sequels eh? maybe

It could be better, if the chapters were longer and not so rushed. Great non-the-less!

There needs to be more Spoots on this site, (I like the sound of that combined paring. Just rolls off the tongue) or at least clopfics. Just like there need to be more Spash stories (Okay Rainbow Dash/Spike doesn't roll off the tongue as much as the previous one, but you can't blame me for trying)

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You really think I tried?

2100092 the rolliness of the tongue con be the same with any CMC

scootaspike for the win. bravo good sir

Another thing i'd like to say is indeed it was an ok story but again could have been a lot better.But then again it seems as if you really didn't try and if i recall you did ask,"Do you really think i tried?"Well i hope you get the point.Also it would be...okay i guess you could say for there to be a sequel and maybe,just maybe,a possible re-edit of this so that it will actually be a lot better and go with the flow even more :3 well not hard feelings if i got carried away on my previous message.so yeah

You should have had a chapter that explained how they all got pregnant from this,lol!

This story contains strong sexual content - no underage readers, PLEASE!

FUCK YOU JUST BECAUSE I AM 17 DON'T MEAN I WON'T READ THIS JUST BECAUSE OF THIS!!!

that was....... Amazing.

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Same😂

8321672 well i am no longer underaged since i am 19 plus that was less than a week before my 18th birthday that i commented that but i still don't see a problem with underaged people enjoying clopfics

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Oh oops, my bad

Swag the Dragon and the CMC were quite endearing in this and Twilight was simply precious.

Most excellent.

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The problem is that it's HIGHLY illegal to distribute pornography to minors.
The site operators could have the site taken down + pay a fine, even go to prison for a good many years

"The law is an ass, an idiot" Mr. Bumble (Bleak House)