420673 personally i wouldn't mind at all!

this... i loved.

Oddly, I'm enjoying this story. It's all good though; I'm 18. =3

Great story!
I can't wait the next part of the chapter with Scootaloo.
Keep makin stories!

"So instead of telling you, we thought of a plan. Let them have sex with you, for practice, so that WE can have sex, and you will be VERY good at it!"

If I may, Spike's next line: "That's the dumbest fucking thing I've ever heard. First off, me having sex with two fillies isn't going to make me Casanova. Second, how would that improve your skills? Third, you have a crush on me, yet you were okay with me fucking your two best friends? Does that not seem odd to you? And fourthly, if you really had those kinds of feelings for me, and wanted to stay with me for more than two weeks (Which I assume is the case), shouldn't we take things slower than this, so we don't screw it up in the long run?"

Next, I thought Twilight left the room! Work on continuity.

Finally, no one gets hard that fast. NO ONE!

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...actually, my first kiss did get pretty awkward, thankfully she never found out.

Error 404 intelligence not found PS spike is fucked

Spike is Not fucked. He will do the Fucking

Spike you pimp...

Okay... I'm confused
My first times were not this ... Bland? How do I say it? Ah yes. Boring and short
Seriously? Dear god I could write better! Oh and trust me tis not a pretty sight, my writing.

2354126 Indeed my thoughts and even i could write better(No offence to the author)But you still could have done a looooot better.And as if this would be something they would agree on,The fellow CMC,They most likely would not want to help Spike get better at SEX,(I mean for fucks sake what where you thinking)?Also might i say how the hell would even a beginner/Virgin even not be able to last longer then that.None the less would a BABY have Semen already and Like Twilight would allow that to happen.I mean they are basically brother and sister,Or even Mother and son(Celestia being more the mother truly).Also,back to the topic of the other CMC.Im sure they'd want the baby at the age of being a kid and all that,Also and by someone they probably would have feelings for(Yes i know its a fanfic but still you could see how Unrealistic this is)Another thing.Why would a baby dragon even be alright with that and change their emotions and thoughts as to what they would have been told to it all being a plan.really though its just...Sorry to be rude and blunt,but its straight up stupid.Sure if it was thought out more and actually more logical and spread out along with more detailed it would be a very better story in my opinion.It would probably be better to even if you actually added more scenes with the CMC instead of Spike,For instance,maybe the CMC or really Scootaloo asking and trying to get the other two to agree to the plan or even for them to see that they truly have feelings to and that gives them the reason agree on the idea.Don't ya think?
Well sorry for being blunt and probably rude,but i'm just criticizing as to show how you could become a better author or writer.I mean its the same with life,a quote or at least what i think is a quote.
"You can never win without loosing."or you can't live life without making mistakes."Get where i'm going with here?Good well thats all i have to say.(Why i sent this as a reply i dont know)