Professor of Antiquities at Pallomare University and a consulting editor at Polo House, Inc. Publishing. (Semi-retired). Occasionally goes by the pen name 'Dragontrapper'
As Trixie trudges alone through the rain, she finds herself looking back on her life - past the days of fame, past the humiliation she's suffered - back to where it all started, with a simple stage, a simple hat, and a friend.
Written for EQD's may 13th flashfic event.
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This story sure has cuteness working in its favor. Your OC and Trixie make a good pair. The character development comes in nice and smoothly, without becoming too distracting from the plot. The plot itself is nice and simple. It's clean, but quite predictable.
I have a few minor issues with the story. Spellbound coming up with the idea that Trixie should fake a persona to get over her confidence issues seems a bit out of the realms of likelihood, and you take it pretty far in a short time. Trixie is also too slow to come to the obvious conclusion at the end and it got a little annoying.
Other than that, a solid story with good characterisation.
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you seem to of read most of these and your critiques are solid so i'm looking to you for yay or nay when it comes to reading these, keep up the good work :p
I'm sad now man....
But I'm glad that Trixie chose to press on.