Shortly after the Running of the Leaves, Applejack's and Rainbow Dash's competitiveness was resolved. Though, this left Applejack with a little bit of a crush on the cyan pegasus.
Meanwhile, Rainbow Dash is awaiting the results of a test to finally see if she can become a Wonderbolt. What will she choose, Applejack or the Wonderbolts?
Credit for cover photo: luna77899 from deviantart.com.
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Oh, I definitely want to see where this is going. Pacing seemed okay. Did notice one or two small things though:
dunno if that was meant to read rope or not.
and I think I noticed a "sugar cube" instead of "Sugarcube" somewhere, but apart from that, I'm following this to see what comes of it.
I like how this is going so far. I look forward to reading more of this as it comes out. Keep up the great writing!
Seems like a simple yet decent concept that fits well with mlp:fim its self and could turn out nicely, i look forward to seeing where this will go
Pretty good for a first chapter, and im sure it can only get better. Keep up the good work!
Well it's awesome all I can say! Great work keep it up. Looking for updates!
Thanks for all the nice comments and the favorites, guys. I wouldn't have expected to get so many in a single day.
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A chapter?
So... Do you mean story or what?
As for the story itself, I dunno, I am an old school guy. Personally, in the past, this would be a featured story. But now-a-days I guess not. Good work.
>>Yasturo
He's commenting on the first chapter of my first fanfiction, I assume.
Thanks for the nice comment, though. I don't think this is featured material, but it's nice to know someone does.
I like
More please! 
Poor AJ
!!!!! Still looking for updates
. It's just so good
now time to wit and stre at the screen till. Update comes!
I think it's kinda cute.
keep p the good work
>>Coco-loco Do you mean “up"?
Rainbow isn't male.
2717840 Oh my goodness. >.> Most of my characters in my stories tend to be male, so I keep saying he instead of she, especially on Rainbow Dash... Thanks for telling me.
Just one piece of friendly advice: pick a tense and stick with it. You flip between tenses in mid-sentence in a few places.
2720314 Thanks for the advice. Tenses tend to be my weak spot and they sometimes get a little crazy.
To cute! I could never think of another reason fo Rainbow to quit!!! Amazing job.
Hard to imagine that was your first story. It seemed to be written by someone with experience. Great story.
2855255 It's only my first MLP story. I've done other fanfiction before. But thanks for the nice comment anyways.
2855267 Oh I guess I didn't catch that. Nevertheless great work.
yeah
potato potato cha cha cha
good job i thought it was good