Vinyl and Octavia have been friends for a long time. But when a dormant bitterness flares up, will their friendship survive?
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Matthias Ramsey
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"Of course, since she wanted it to be a surprise, she had to make excuses. The "empty promises" were really genuine, but had to be broken in order to keep up the ruse."
That... doesn't really make any sense. Excuses are one thing, promises are another.
oh hey look, another 'I Am Octavia' inspired story xD... ive got one tiny blurb dedicated to that song too. Check mine while i check urs D
... Vinyl forgot her wallet, and claims she has enough cash wj
hen she can't even pay for her own ticket?
... dude... these feels i do not understand. They overwhelm me with D'AAWWWWS and SQUEEEE, and my fic in comparison lacks it. Ive taken the painful route rather... o.o
Although, as a tip, just combine all the chapters as one, with linebteaks for each section (or paragraphs for simplicity)... easier on my bandwidth and data usage
2550761 Yeah, I expected that someone would find something in there. I didn't reread it before I submitted it.
I'll try to fix it.
2551187 I'll see what I can do, but I did it that way because I felt like combining the chapters would lessen the effect.
2551162 What she was saying was that she had enough saved up. Winesap was offering in case she needed help renting an apartment.
2551152 I've got it ready to read later. I'll be sure to read it before I start my next one. Besides, I need to write a short song for it anyway.
I'm impressed. Usually, I shy away from stories with multiple short chapters, but this was very well done. It was sweet, heartwarming, and quite an enjoyable read. Bravo.
2551353 Thank you very much. And thanks for being my first follower!
2551380 Of course, you seem to be an interesting writer.
2551386 Thank you for saying so! The next one I'm doing isn't going to be as heartwarming as this. I'm going for heart-chilling this time.
Hey! Nice story! ima gonna hit the follow button :D
Check out my fic "Blizzard"
2551392 As does everyone else I communicate with on this site. (Really just you and two other guys) I have come to expect that people will write these things and I shall at least check it out. I can't exactly proclaim myself to be a huge fan of horror.
2551402 Sure thing! Not a problem!
2551403 Me neither. I am, however, a fan of dark stories.
2551411 Dark like Foal suicide, or Dark like murder of loved one?
2551416 Either, really. If it can make me cry (or want to cry) I tend to like it a lot and remember it.
I cry
2551734 Wow, I didn't expect someone to cry.
That's good though. Means I'm doing my job.
This....is the most beautiful, inspiring, well-written, heart-warming, spine-tingling, hoof-licking story ever!!<3
I look forward to reading your other stories~
Somepony should invest in making this story into a brony-made episode, honestly!
2552403 Sweet Celestia, man. I didn't think it was THAT good...
2552414 Oooooh talented and modest, bet you're popular with the mares....or stallions, whichever is your cup of tea
2552436 not particularly. I'm the least social pony I know.
Your chapters are way too short. I swear you could have condensed several of these super short chapters into something decent.
2554875 I had a compulsion to do it that way. Yes, I know I could've condensed them, and the thought crossed my mind several times while writing it. I promise, I won't do that with my chapters anymore. Did you at least enjoy the story?
I loved it. Good work!
Good work, but your chapters were WAY too short.
Personally, I think the short chapters makes it easier to read and more tense. Good story!
This is a great story. As an aspiring fanfic author, this will be great inspiration.
geez... you are sour grapes
ha dude i found your youtube chnl xD
2608492 Oh, you did? You sure?
2609687 it's either that, or someone's reading your fic on a youtube chnl o.o
2610939 Yeah, that's not me. Could you link me the video?
2610982 http://www.youtube.com/#/watch?v=GTTSSfW5bmE&desktop_uri=%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DGTTSSfW5bmE
im surprised to see no comments here ! Great job
this is veyr very good but i wish you had made the chapters longer ^_^
Short but powerful. A good combination for any story.
My heart broke
How is it so easy for someone to break up