Matthias Ramsey
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dat last sentence
2640297 It took me a few minutes to come up with that.
Welp, they were pretty dumb, six national heroes vs two prejudice hicks, do the math. Then again Aj is pretty bad at fancy mathematics.
Also thanks for not adding the rom tag. Pity love always pissed me off. Liked it anyway.
2640485 Not a problem.
Well, you have a good style. I like how you had definitions for the words that were essentially the main points of each chapter at the top. But I think that you rushed Twilight's conclusion that her friends did it. I'm pretty sure that Twilight's absolute last guess would be that her friends would've been behind Applejack's death. She would've believed anything before she believed her friends killed AJ. So that was very OOC for her, but everything else was okay.
Suspense...
DABDA the response humans (and possibly other sentient creatures) go through when confronted by death, nice touch.
Uhh......................................huh. Nnope.