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Rift Mane always wanted to become a great summoner and become one of the most well known names in the order of legends, but after a mix up she finds she gets her wish in a way she never expected. Forced in a fight for her life can she navigate the treacherous social field of the order or will she lose her life permanently?
League of legends crossover with mlp.
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I could see how this could use some extra work, but a League of Ponies story is always welcome in my book.
Especially if it's the first real one I've seen, even if it is about OC's.
There, added a little bonus section I managed to finish.
2510310 Thankies ^^ Sadly I never played the original dota but I'm still trying to keep to the spirit... Well the same spirit that lol keeps to it.
2510286 Aye. Originally I was going to have Twilight be the main character but in the end I decided to just try for something new. I had a story in mind for Rift ages ago but sadly I never got around to writing it. In the end I realized she would be perfect for such a world, considering her special talent. Also, about the extra work, I try to always be susceptible to feedback so any thoughts I would love to hear.
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If you have Skype, add me. Kalreas is the name.
If you play League of Legends any, add me there too. Don't play that as much nowadays with school into my daily mix, but I still enjoy a game from time to time. Name on there is Kalreas as well.
As for feedback, I could always tell you either in a PM at a later time, because I'm going to bed after I send this, or through Skype.
Enjoy yourself until then! - Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire
So... you weren't impressed by Zac either then.
2510638 Hee hee. Actually I found him to be a bit funny. Any views of the characters do not necessarily represent the views of the author because I am a slave to the plot convenience. >.>
Im loving the story so far!
Any fanfic of league is awesome anyways
but this is very noice indeed!!
I found only minor grammar and spelling mistakes which will need some tweaking
and i'd like for you to explore the thought process of the characters or be more informative of the befolding events
Hope I'll appear soon
2511548 Thanks ^^ I was actually really excited when I was writing this and it just flowed onto the paper. I do plan on doing a bit more exploration in the next chapter but this was really mostly a intro. Ironically I've been getting a lot of feedback but a lot of down votes so I can't tell if this story is good or bad yet >.> Any thing you notice wrong feel free to tell me ^^ I want to improve all my stories as much as I can but sadly I tend to miss a lot of my faults so I depend on my dear readers to help me out when they feel they can.
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Well one of the issues is that you have many many run-on sentences
for example:
You'd want to not strain too much of a sentence's length cause it could lead to run-on sentences. That means you have more than one idea crammed into one sentence without adding a punctuation mark in between. You also have an issue with punctuating adjectives and adverbs etc. So the correct version would be:
2514800 Thanks ^^ I'll try to go over it again after I get home from work. Thanks for the feed back.
2521668 ... Oh. Well, ummm, in that case....
*feels better* I'd never gotten such a downvote ratio before, well except that one story that was just bad, and was starting to really worry >.> I dun like writing stories that suck D:
Well... that came out of nowhere.
Fun to read anyway though.